Even When My Coach Told Me to Quit, I Never Gave Up My Technique. 2
Author's Note, Before Reading.
This is an experimental story.
This short story is a "test" of a new narrative technique I'm considering for the main series.
Mostly first-person (Nozomi's POV).
But when she "passes something" to someone else, the POV shifts.
TV remote → third-person broadcast
Menu → third-person waiter
Spoon → first-person Tsuyako
And when that "something" (or its result) returns to her, we shift back to Nozomi.
(Menu → food arrives, spoon → change received)
After reading…
If you think, "This is interesting!" Use it in the main story" please let me know.
If you think, "This feels off," please let me know that too.
I want to let your voices decide how the main story is told.
If you're willing, join me in this experiment.
I'm waiting for your thoughts.
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