thank you very much to all of you who have read my story. Sorry if my response is a bit late because I myself also have work in the real world so I can't reply in real-time to your comments.
Maybe it will be a few hours late or it could be a few days.
I'm an amateur writer, so I'm still trying to learn to improve my writing style. and I'm very grateful for all the suggestions given for this story.
maybe next week I will try to discuss Shikamaru's abilities and for sure there will be a change in the timeline compared to the original story.
all the characters in my story are original works of their respective original authors/mangaka. I'm just trying to make fanfic based on it and have no intention of plagiarism at all.
And for all readers to always buy original works, because making a Manga/Novel is not easy at all.
They also sacrifice their time, energy, and creativity for the story so all readers can enjoy the story too.