Morning felt washed and put back where it belongs. Oakwatch blinked — . (ready); Millcross, Knoll, Turnstone, Barrowford answered — . / . —; dawn's double-tuk set the day on its rails. Five Stable Fields purred; Corner Nets sipped; the Quiet Lock breathed "behave." The cairns along Founders' Way hummed one syllable when Jory tapped them—ready. 🙂
— Morning Brief — Rope & Rest (Teach Sleep to the Day)• Aim: finish the Drum-man's rope sentence (day 60), formalize sleep doctrine for hinge crews and clerks• Tools: hour cards (two short bookends), Spare stool by soup, "felt okay after — Y/N" audits, double-tuk at dusk/dawn• Upgrades: hinge-watch rotas with naps; "quiet lanes" at clinics (no bells); pocket-white mirrors on night shelves• Watch: latch pennon "rehabilitation tax," Pike rumor ("sweep = shame"), Moth mirror with polite blinks, violet pacing upriver• After-Sight: Ready (0/1)• Morale: Soft-proud, a little tender 🙂
"Today we graduate a broom," Elara said, helm tucked under her arm, voice lighter than yesterday. "We also teach sleep like it's a civic subject."
"Soup before syllabus," Mara replied, thumping her pot under the SPARE stool she'd written in charcoal. 😑🍲
The drum-man—thin, roped forearms, a face that had learned to be sorry without groveling—was already sweeping the ferry planks when we arrived. Sixty days ago he'd tried to sell the river a lie with a toll cord and a voice trained to be confident. We'd taken his cord, given him a broom, and set him where the chain could see him. The broom had not made him small. It had made him real.
He paused as Tavi checked the rope book. Lia's cousin stood on her crate with her stamp, solemn and excited at the same time. 🫡
"Day six-zero," Tavi read. "Duty: ferry boards, row rhythm. Witness: white post. Payment: rope + soup. Felt okay after — ?"
"Y," the drum-man said, and his voice didn't break.
There was clapping, but not the noisy kind. Two short. Space. Respect. Jory gave the mast-step tuk and the chain's song landed on it like a coin on a table done vibrating.
— Rope Close — Drum-man (Public)• Sentence: 60 broom days (ferry; chain-house), all visible under white• Metrics: 58× Y, 2× N (cold days; soup added)• Outcome: loops returned; market shun lifted; training option offered (hinge/watch cadence)
"Speech?" Venn suggested, half-teasing.
The drum-man shook his head. "I was loud enough already," he said. Then, quieter: "Let me keep sweeping. Not every day. Just… some. It makes the river… straight."
Gran Edla snorted approval like a benediction. "Correct."
Elara's mouth quirked. "Workday stipend," she said. "You stay ours because you act like it."
Mara pressed him a bowl like a seal. "Eat before you volunteer for humility," she ordered. 🍲🙂
We walked the sleep into the day like we were laying felt under stairs.
Venn and Tess stapled Hour Cards to posts:
Dawn: double-tuk; two short opens.
Mid: clerk . . rollcall; felt okay after — Y/N spot checks (soft voices).
Dusk: double-tuk; one long closes; Spare stool reserved.
Jory tuned the bells so ladle and chain agree at dusk even if the wind has opinions. Clinics tacked up a Quiet Lane sign: no bells, no pleas, soup voice only. Lia's cousin assigned herself Spare-stool bailiff and placed a folded blanket there with ceremonial ferocity. 😠🪑
— System — Sleep Doctrine (Civic)• Double-tuk at dawn/dusk mandatory; mast-step sets row rhythm for closing as well as opening• Spare stool at soup: anyone may sit; no questions first; clerk notes "sat at Spare" in rope book (no shame)• Hinge-watch rotas: 3-on / 1-nap; nap cots posted in sight of hinge; pocket-white mirrors hung above cots• Quiet Lane at clinics: bells banned; ladle voice only; cold-burn care prioritized
Rinna and Émile moved cots into sightlines: you can nap with the hinge, not away from it. "Hinge wants eyes," Kessa reminded the crews, tucking a spare felt square under each cot's leg so sleep didn't echo. Hadrik carved NO GREEDY SHOT into a pillow frame because superstition has earned tenure.
Lucien trained the fox wash on a new trick: ears. No rush. No line. Just the habit of noticing when a person's shoulders sag one breath early. He called it catching drift. "We keep lanes," he told them, "including the one in your chest."
Aiden pressed thumb to brow and let After-Sight rub at his bone. The ache behind his right eye came warm, not knife; the chalk line drew the day's small lies: Pike rumor that "sweep is shame," a latch pennon offering rehabilitation tax ("pay us to say you're forgiven"), a mirror blink on the north spur that meant sincere curiosity, and the violet upriver pacing like a patient animal on a leash it intends to chew through.
"It's a day for cleaning up petty," he said. "And for teaching the hour to sit."
"Good arithmetic," Elara answered.
Pike tried rebranding. Of course they did.
A boy with a tidy grin and a ledger stood on Knoll green with a placard that read REHABILITATION TAX — WE END YOUR BROOM EARLY. He wore his best "I'm helping" face.
Lia's cousin climbed the Parley Box like a small, furious thundercloud. "White eats first," she announced, pointing at the pot, which Mara made boil exactly on cue. "Then work. Then sleep. There is no tax on not being a villain anymore." 🙂
The boy blinked. "But the public wants to—"
"Public wants soup," Mara said, ladle like a gavel. 😑🍲
Venn held the Not Our P broadside next to the boy's receipts; the P leaned like a drunk uncle. The crowd laughed—the relieved kind. Edla's ferry nephews escorted the boy to the broom rack with the dignity of ushers at a wedding for humility.
— Adjudication — "Rehabilitation Tax" (Knoll)• Papers: leaning-P; stamped SILLIEST POSSIBLE CLAIM• Sentence: 3 broom days in view of Parley Box; rope entry: tried to sell forgiveness• Note: liaison to clinic Quiet Lane for boy after day 1 (felt okay after — N)
He swept. Not punished—repaired. On day three, he asked to help carry cots. Lia's cousin stamped Y with a smile she hid poorly.
Upstream, a mirror blinked. Not threat. Not yet. The Moth has a grammar for interest. Jory blinked . . back (clerk present) and held up, for comic emphasis, the SPARE stool. The mirror did not understand the joke and therefore turned away. 🙂
At Turnstone, we made a ceremony of naps.
Tavi nailed a plank under the lock eave:
NAPS ARE WHITE.If you sleep where the hinge can see you, the hinge will sleep too.
Bank-paint cutters, who have opinions on dignity, read it twice. Then the scarred elder from Charter day lay down on the new cot with his hands crossed on his chest like a king telling the river it can wait. He slept. When he woke, he looked younger by two songs.
"Roots, not," he said, satisfied.
A rumor-runner tried the canal again with a whisper that naps are dereliction. Kessa spat on his stamp; it bled like river ink; Edla's nephews applauded with exactly two claps; Lucien pointed toward the Spare stool without speaking. The runner sat. He didn't nap, but his breath slowed.
"Sometimes you have to learn how to be tired in public," Venn said, writing sat at Spare in the rope book in tidy script.
— Civic — Teach Sleep (Turnstone)• Naps posted and witnessed; "NAPS ARE WHITE" doctrine public• Rumor "naps = dereliction" broomed (2 days); runner logged sat at Spare (Y after soup)• Chain & lock cadence matched at dusk; crews reported felt okay after — Y up 18%
Midday, the drum-man returned with a broom. Not assigned. Chosen.
He paused at the soup to ask Lia's cousin permission to sweep the SPARE stool's feet. "It felt like it was keeping me," he said, embarrassed and proud. "I want it to stay lucky for someone else."
"Permission granted," she said in full clerk voice, then softer: "Thank you." 😊
He swept like a man explaining a theology: push, lift, set, breathe. Edla watched him and, in an outburst of un-Edla-like emotion, gave him a stamp: FERRY KEEPER, in cramped letters that will cut cheese.
"Don't ruin it," she warned.
"I ruined that before," he said. "I won't again."
Mara pushed him a second bowl. "Eat before you go make me proud in front of people," she said, which is her version of hugging someone to death. 🍲🙂
Aiden stood with his palm on the white post, letting relief be a thing. The ache behind his eye had a rhythm today—worse at the hour, softer at the half—like the violet was counting. He pressed his thumb harder and tasted iron.
Elara drifted to his shoulder, not asking, simply there. "Report," she murmured.
"Pacing," he said. "Learning our bookends."
"Then bookend harder," she said. "Jory?"
"New habit," Jory answered, already chalking: . . clerks to blink with each double-tuk; mast-step tuk to hit a long ghost on dawn that only hinges hear. "We'll mother-hen the day into its cot."
"Soup at dusk," Mara volunteered. "New pot. Sleep pot. Different herbs. Don't argue." 😑🍲
We did not.
Late afternoon brought a gift from the Moth dressed as diplomacy.
Two clean coats and a polite plank, carried between them, arrived at Millcross bay. On the plank: a white flag—real fabric, correct knotting, the right iron-rust at the hem—folded into a triangle, placed atop a set of printed "Sleep Schedules for Efficient Calm."
Rinna folded her arms so her biceps could be policy. "You may set the plank down," she told them.
"We come in truce," the taller said, bowing to the flag. "A sleep plan saves labor. We bring you ours." He tapped the print: six-hour blocks, single bell at half, Remove Post-Meal Drowse,Replace Broom Days With Fines, No Child Authority After Dusk.
Lia's cousin made a noise like a tiny kettle boiling. 😠
Émile flicked the corner of the print. "Ink is good," he conceded. "Content is bad."
Kessa picked up the folded white and held it like a baby she'd deliver back to its parents after the lecture. "We already have a plan," she said. "It starts with Naps Are White, and ends with Spare."
"A plan cannot be a stool," the shorter objected.
"A plan can be a promise," Elara said. "And ours is a promise."
The clean coats exchanged looks. Then, deliberately, the taller stepped back from the plank and bowed very slightly. "Understood," he said. "We had to ask."
"Permission to leave the flag?" he added, respectful.
Elara looked to Aiden. The ache throbbed. He nodded. "White stays home," he said. "Thank you."
They left the sleep schedule print, too. Venn tacked it to the Bad Fonts, Bad Faith board with a note: ink quality acceptable; soul poor.
— Encounter — Moth "Sleep Schedule"• Offered: rigid blocks; fines instead of broom days; no child authority after dusk• Refused: doctrine unchanged (Naps Are White; Spare; child-sun powers intact)• White flag: accepted, logged, returned to post custody• Print posted to shame board with librarian snark 🙂
Dusk came tidy and right.
Double-tuk rolled down the five towns like a mother calling her children in from the yard. Two short widened lanes; one long waited, patient, at the edge of the day like a lamp turned low. The Spare stool had a quilt now (Lia's cousin's idea; Mara pretended the quilt had always been there). The drum-man set his broom by the door the way you holster a weapon you intend to use again soon, and sat at Spare like a man proving a lesson by example.
Jory added the new hinge-only ghost long under the dawn tap—just a breath, just for iron. Hadrik smiled like only mechanics do when physics says thank you. The chain at Barrowford echoed the ghost long later, a shy murmur like a throat clearing itself in its sleep.
The rope books closed their day with twelve Y notes that wouldn't have been Y yesterday. Garet drew a sun beside each because he is a sentimental and precise man. Clinics wiped their counters in Quiet Lane and pushed the bell hooks into a tin labeled strings & stupidity because sometimes you have to generate your own comedy.
Aiden sank onto the lock stair, back to felt. The ache behind his eye did a last count—one-two, one-two—and then settled with the dusk tap like a coin that accepts the table is level. He did not kid himself into thinking this was victory. But it was right now. And right now is a profession.
Elara sat beside him, their shoulders touching the way hinges do when you've finally oiled them. "Still us," she said quietly.
"Still us," he agreed, and his smile was the tired, real kind. 🙂
Mara handed them two bowls that smelled like herbs and something that had learned to be calm under boiling. "Sleep soup," she announced, as if soup requires a title. "Drink before you decide to be brave about anything." 😑🍲
They drank.
"Novaterra," Aiden told the cairns and the tower and the white posts with their new naps, "we graduated a broom, taught sleep to the hour, turned Spare into a promise, and refused a tax on forgiveness. A polite plank brought a white flag and a bad schedule; we kept the flag and laughed the schedule into the shame board. The ache is counting along with our bells now; that's fine—we'll teach it the double-tuk. The hour shook hands. No heroics. Just work." 🙂
— Evening Summary — Novaterra / Sixtieth Day• Drum-man completed 60 broom days; chose to keep sweeping sometimes; rope Y; shun lifted• Sleep Doctrine enacted: Naps Are White; Spare stool by soup; hinge rotas with cots; Quiet Lane (no bells)• Rehab Tax scam broomed; rumor "sweep = shame" → laughed off; rope books: Y up• Moth offered "sleep schedule" (fines, no child authority) → refused; white flag accepted to custody• Upgrades: hinge ghost-long at dawn; double-tuk internalized; chain hum steadier at night• Threat: violet pacing upriver; mirror polite; forecast—stand will try inside a person next• System: panic −sm; rest quality +med; seer-ache synced to bells (manageable) 😣→🙂• Morale: Soft-proud; soup excellent; roads, ferries, canal open 🙂
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