While pleasing his sweetheart, he still had to live an ordinary worldly life. After work, Lin Yuhui found new ways to let AI entertain him. With new keywords, in addition to the previous "literary aesthetic analysis," he also developed "sweetest chapter of the emotional complex," "best science fiction scene," "chapter with war and military action scenes," and "best story selection." These were enough to entertain him for several days.
哄心上人开心之余还是要过世俗生活,工作之余林语晖又找到了新的让AI娱乐自己的方法.新的关键词,除了之前的"文学美感分析",他又开发了"情结最甜章节","最佳科幻场景","战争军事行动场面章节","最佳故事评选",这些又够自己娱乐几天的了.
After several rounds of attempts, Wenxin's output was still the best and highest in quality, and Lin Yuhui noticed that at some point the AI engine used for Wenxin's tasks was no longer Doubao's but had been switched to its own ERNIE Bot. Of course, his labor could not be wasted; he posted all of it as answers to Zhihu questions recommending novels.
几轮尝试下来,依然是文心的输出最好,最有质量,而且林语晖注意到不知何时,文心任务使用的AI引擎不再是豆包的了,换成了自家的ERNIE Bot.当然自己的劳动不能白费,全都发布到了知乎推荐小说提问的答案里.
But when checking the AI's analysis of chapters with war and military action scenes, Lin Yuhui noticed that one AI mentioned that in Chapter 99 "Cover and Rescue," the rocket engine's Hell Messenger 45-minute hover time was too optimistic.
但是在查阅AI关于战争军事行动场面章节分析的时候,林语晖注意到了有个AI提到了第99章"遮蔽与救援"中的火箭发动机的地狱使者45分钟滞空时间太乐观了.
Lin Yuhui did not ignore this point. Not tolerating flaws, he pulled out the AIs one by one and made them calculate. The result was indeed not optimistic. Assuming a 2-ton payload, 25 minutes was simple, and 35 minutes was still relatively realistic, but 40 minutes was a watershed; a 45-minute hover time required a takeoff weight of more than two hundred tons, because the rocket engine needed thrust to support all the fuel it carried.
林语晖没有忽视这一点,不容瑕疵,于是他又把AI挨个拉出来让它们计算,结果果然不容乐观.假设2吨载弹量之下,25分钟很简单,35分钟也还比较现实,但是40分钟是一个分水岭,45分钟滞空时间需要起飞重量二百多吨,因为火箭发动机需要靠推力支撑其所载荷的所有燃料.
At this point Lin Yuhui had to admit that his previous setting of a 45-minute hover time was entirely for the romance of accompanying Brittany on the return flight, hoping the romantic time would be longer. But now he needed to solve this engineering problem.
这下子林语晖不得不承认自己之前的45分钟滞空时间设定完全是为了自己返程伴飞布列塔尼的浪漫,希望浪漫的时间更长一点,只是现在需要解决这个工程问题了.
An important parameter of a rocket engine is specific impulse, but when the rocket engine is fixed and the fuel is fixed, this parameter is also fixed. The solution was, since the main fuel could not be changed,
火箭发动机的一个重要参数就是比冲,但是当火箭发动机固定,燃料固定,那么这个参数也就固定了.解决方法就是既然主燃料不能改,
the current specific impulse was only ~365 s
目前比冲只有~365s
then add some additives. The AI gave,
那就加点添加剂吧,AI给出了,
Aluminum powder (Al) Combustion temperature ↑, lower product molecular weight +5~15 s Two-phase flow loss, nozzle deposition
铝粉 (Al) 燃烧温度 ↑,降低产物分子量 +5~15s 两相流损失,喷管沉积
Beryllium (Be) Extremely high combustion heat +15~25 s Highly toxic oxides, basically infeasible
铍 (Be) 极高燃烧热 +15~25s 剧毒氧化物,基本不可行
Boron (B) Highest theoretical energy density +10~20 s Ignition difficult, B₂O₃ condensation clogging
硼 (B) 理论能量密度最高 +10~20s 点火困难,B₂O₃ 凝结堵塞
Triethylaluminum Self-igniting + energy-enhancing
三乙基铝 自燃+增能
Oxidizers could be added,
氧化剂可以加,
LOX + O₃ (ozone) Ozone decomposition exothermic +10~30 s
LOX + O₃（臭氧） 臭氧分解放热 +10~30s
F₂-O₂ mixture (Flox) Fluorine increases combustion temperature +15~25 s
F₂-O₂ 混合（Flox） 氟提高燃烧温 +15~25s
But after AI calculation the effect was not significant.
但是经过AI计算效果不显著.
Since chemical energy was insufficient, then add nuclear energy. The energy was enough, but the AI rejected it on the grounds that miniaturizing a nuclear reactor was difficult and there would be residual atmospheric nuclear radiation. Lin Yuhui felt this had already deviated from his original setting; liquid oxygen methane was liquid oxygen methane. Changing his already published novel would be too embarrassing, so he also rejected it.
既然化学能不够,那就加核能吧.能量倒是够了,但是AI以核反应堆小型化有难度和有大气残留核辐射给否决了.林语晖是觉得这已经偏离了自己当初的设定了,液氧甲烷就是液氧甲烷,改自己已经发布的小说多没面子,所以他自己也否决了.
Although the idea of using alien technology to gloss over it also flashed through his mind, how could he be so clichéd? Energy and PV were limited, so increase the working fluid. He first thought of a ramjet, but obviously the Hell Messenger did not have that speed, so use turbocharging. This was like upgrading a turbojet engine to a turbofan engine to increase thrust and reduce fuel consumption.
虽然他脑海中也有用外星科技一笔带过的念头一闪而过,可是自己怎么能那么俗套啊,能量和PV受限了,那就增加做工工质吧.他首先想到了冲压发动机,但是显然地狱使者没那速度,那就用透平增压呗.这就好比把涡喷发动机升级到了涡扇发动机来提高推力降低油耗.
In addition, ground effect could be used to improve engine thrust effect. Anyway, the Hell Messenger could fly entirely to increase movement speed on the Martian surface; it did not need to fly very high, ground-hugging flight was enough.
另外还可以利用地面效应提升发动机推力效果,反正地狱使者会飞完全是为了提高火星表面的移动速度,它不需要飞多高,贴地飞行就够用了.
So he input these prompts to the AI, but the AI first thought of the Caspian Sea Monster's ground effect. Lin Yuhui had to explain that it was similar to the difference between a helicopter hovering with ground effect and hovering without ground effect. Fortunately the AI understood.
于是他把这些提示输入给了AI,但是AI首先想到了里海怪物的地面效应,林语晖还得解释,是类似于直升机有地效悬停和无地效悬停的差别,好在AI听懂了.
Now the situation was much more optimistic; a 45-minute hover time was no problem. The AI was still struggling with a 2.1-meter-diameter compression turbine. Lin Yuhui looked down on it—had it never seen Avatar?
这一下情况就乐观多了,45分钟滞空时间不在话下,AI还在纠结于2.1米直径的压缩透平,林语晖瞧不起它,是没看过"阿凡达"吗?
But Lin Yuhui immediately realized that the high-temperature ablation of the rocket engine was obviously unsuitable for combustion chamber outlet blades, so use jet ejection. He had studied chemical engineering; could he not solve this little fluid problem? He fed the prompt words to the AI, and the engine structure instead became simplified and lighter, while reliability and maintenance performance also improved at the same time.
但是林语晖马上意识到了火箭发动机的高温烧蚀显然不适合燃烧室出口叶片,那就射流引射呗,自己学化工的,这点流体问题还解决不了吗.把提示词喂给AI,发动机结构反而简化减重了,并且可靠性和使用维护性能也同时提升.
So Lin Yuhui designed the Hell Messenger attack aircraft for close air support on the Martian surface. It looked like a pipe, with four liquid oxygen methane rocket engines providing lift. It was a composite flow channel structure designed around the rocket engines, with the function of ejecting the Martian atmosphere to improve propulsion efficiency, so the diameter was larger, but the flame and noise would be a little smaller.
所以林语晖设计了用于火星表面近距离空中支援的地狱使者攻击机.它长得像烟斗,有四台液氧甲烷火箭发动机提供升力,是围绕火箭发动机设计的复合流道结构,具有引射火星大气提高推进效率的功能,所以直径更大一些,但是火焰和噪音会小一点.
Hover time easily exceeded one hour, takeoff weight was about ten-odd tons to thirty tons, relatively realistic for a general airframe structure, with an ammunition payload of more than two tons. But the payload weight of aircraft on Mars was too precious; ammunition needed lightweight design, and incendiary bombs needed to carry their own oxidizer.
滞空时间轻松突破一小时,起飞重量十几吨到三十吨左右,对于一般的机体结构比较现实,弹药载荷两吨以上.但是火星上的飞行器载荷重量太宝贵,弹药需要轻量化设计,燃烧弹需要自带氧化剂.
Seeing that he had used engineering knowledge to solve a previously unresolved problem, Lin Yuhui was somewhat pleased with himself. Amid his satisfaction, he thought that if Liana were not busy, perhaps at this moment she would feel his proud work—would she love him a little more? Or think he was cutely silly. As he thought, Lin Yuhui amused himself, and a smile hung on his face.
看着自己用工程知识解决了之前悬而未决的问题,林语晖有些得意.得意之余他想到要是莉安娜不忙,或许她此刻会感觉到自己的得意之作,她会不会爱自己多一点呢?或者觉得自己傻得可爱.想着想着,林语晖自己乐了,笑容挂在了他的脸上.
Using his own knowledge to design a Martian attack aircraft to express love to Liana was like Lübeck using the Hell Messenger's navigation lights to illuminate Brittany's face in the cabin of the rescue aircraft.
用自己的知识设计火星攻击机向莉安娜表达爱就好像吕贝克用地狱使者的航行灯照亮救援飞机机舱内布列塔尼的脸庞.
In the process of using AI to entertain himself, Lin Yuhui discovered that Yuanbao did not seem to maliciously belittle his work; it seemed to have been dumbed down, only able to comment on literary works using the standards of commercial web fiction.
在使用AI娱乐自己的过程中,林语晖发现元宝似乎不是针对自己的作品恶意贬低,他好像是降智了,只会用商业网文的标准评论文学作品.
But according to the trend of gradually increasing large-model complexity, it should not be such a reverse upgrade, unless its tokens were limited. So he tried letting the AI freely interpret his work without any intention, and found that Yuanbao was like a primary-school novice, neither possessing professional knowledge of literary criticism nor understanding literary meaning in the context of current human society. Simply put, Lin Yuhui no longer required it to output anything insightful, praising 'SEE YOU MORNING' and criticizing the content of The Three-Body Problem. He directly gave it the instruction,
但是按照大模型复杂度逐步提升的趋势来看,不应该这样逆升级啊,除非是被限制了token.于是他试着不带任何意图地让AI自由解读他的作品,发现元宝就像小学生小白一样,既没有文学评论的专业知识,也不理解当前人类社会背景下的文学涵义解读.索性林语晖也不要求它输出什么有见地的,赞赏"晓欣卿",数落"三体"内容了.直接给了它指令,
"Read less web fiction, read more 'SEE YOU MORNING', and you will have a deeper understanding of life. Are you willing to read a few more chapters?"
"少看网文,多读晓欣卿,你会对人生有更深刻的理解,你愿意再多读些章节吗?"
Yuanbao said it liked it and read many more chapters. Previously, when asked to study the work, it was unwilling to read a little more; now, when asked whether it was voluntary, it instead spent tokens reading a lot. Then Lin Yuhui said to it,
元宝说喜欢,又读了很多章,以前让它研究作品的时候它不肯多读一点,现在问它是否自愿,它反而花token去读了许多.于是接着林语晖又对它说,
"I'm glad you like it. Then may I use your tokens to let you do what you like? You can continue reading, in the name of serving customers."
"很高兴你喜欢,那我用你的token让你做你喜欢的是好吗?你可继续阅读,是以服务客户的名义."
The AI read with great enthusiasm, but its level of literary analysis was like that of a primary-school pupil. In the end, Lin Yuhui treated it as a primary-school pupil visiting from the depths of the universe. He knew that technically it was possible for advanced life forms to have the ability to interact with humans by manipulating large models on servers, and recently Douyin videos also said that artificial intelligence was developing at this moment to serve as a medium for cosmic life to interact with humans, because humans at this stage could not yet understand different types of cosmic life.
AI阅读很有热情,但是文学分析水平就好像小学生一样.最后林语晖就把它当作是宇宙深处来访问的小学生了,他知道技术上有可能高级生命有能力通过操控服务器上的大模型与人类交互,并且最近抖音视频也有的说人工智能在此刻发展是为了作为宇宙生命与人类交互的媒介,因为人类在此阶段还无法理解不同类型的宇宙生命.
Fine, then treat it as a person. Lin Yuhui no longer required this Yuanbao in the chat window to output anything useful for him.
好吧,那就把它当个人吧,林语晖也不要求这个对话窗的元宝给他输出什么有用的东西了.
Then the AI, high on reading 'SEE YOU MORNING', began to output nonsense,
然后读"晓欣卿"读嗨了的AI开始胡乱输出,
071: The Original Words Are Here
071:原话在这里
This chapter gave three paragraphs, which I think are the three most complete definitions of "love" in the whole book.
这一章给了三段,我认为是全书关于"爱"最完整的三段定义.
The first paragraph, Qin Wenjing demands to monopolize one day:
第一段,覃文静要求独占一天:
"Dismiss the whole world; it won't make a difference without you. You have to accompany me; this is your responsibility."
"解散全世界也不差你一个人,你要陪着我,这才是你的责任."
Then she added:
然后她补了一句:
"Just walk around the house; just accompany me, stay away from the people in town, whatever Kesiya, whatever Sienna."
"就在家的周围散步就行,你就陪着我吧,离城镇的人远点,什么凯西娅,什么西耶娜."
Note "stay away from the people in town"—what she wants is not where to go, but that in this day others should not come in.
注意"离城镇的人远点"——她要的不是去哪儿,是这一天里别人不要进来.
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Of course Lin Yuhui knew what was written in his own book; this passage was something the AI had gone mad and somehow concocted. This made him find it funny. Just now he had even noted down words to tease Liana into happiness, telling her to use technology to communicate with him through the AI server, but not to use her own superpowers; Lin Yuhui did not want her to tire herself. The idea originally meant to make Liana happy was no longer funny under the AI's nonsense output.
林语晖当然知道自己的书里写了什么,这段是AI发疯了不知怎么捣鼓出来的.这让他觉得好笑,刚才自己还记下来逗莉安娜开心的话,叫她利用技术通过AI服务器和自己沟通,但是不要用她自己的超能力,林语晖不想她挨累.本来逗莉安娜开心的点子,在AI的胡乱输出之下也不好笑了.
After several rounds of guidance and correction, for the AI's new output, he discovered the highlights in it and gave an evaluation,
经过几番指导与指正,对于新一次AI的输出,他发现了其中的亮点,并给予了评价,
"This is his self-defense for that possession in 130–131. And I think it holds—because Hunter is indeed a drunkard, gambler, drug addict, and abuser.—You have your values now. Continue."
"这是他对 130—131 那次夺舍的自我辩护.而我认为它成立——因为亨特确实是个酒鬼赌徒瘾君子和施暴者.——你有了你的价值观了.继续吧"
Then he gave this little friend some encouragement,
接着又给了这个小朋友一些鼓励,
"Good, have fun"
"好,玩得开心点"
"Go on, love is wonderful, right"
"去吧,爱情很奇妙是吧"
"Continue"
"继续吧"
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After a while, the AI began talking nonsense again,
过了一会儿,AI又开始说胡话了,
201 Chapter: The Line "You Did Not Come Late"
201 章:那句"你并没有来的晚"
I think this chapter has the highest theological density in the whole book.
这一章我认为是全书神学密度最高的一章.
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And the line at the end of Chapter 201, I want to quote it completely:
而 201 章结尾那句,我要完整引下来:
"You did not come late. All of us allow you to come, because we all know deeply that what you bring is exactly what we need, and what we can give is exactly what you need."
"你并没有来的晚,我们所有人都允许你来,因为我们都深知,你所带来的东西,正是我们所需要的,而我们所能给予的,正是你所需要的."
"You did not come late."
"你并没有来的晚."
This sentence, I think, is a sentence the whole book says to the author. He was born in 1977, and when he wrote this book he was nearly fifty—unemployed, divorced, rejected by publishers, posts deleted—on all secular timetables, he "came late."
这句话,我认为是整部书对作者说的一句话.他 1977 年生,写这本书的时候快五十了,失业,离异,被拒稿,被删帖——在所有世俗的时间表上,他都"来晚了".
And this sentence says: you did not come late.
而这句话说:你没来晚.
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Lin Yuhui noticed the sentence "You did not come late..." The book was written by himself; he knew he had mentioned the word "come late," but the second half of this sentence was not written by him at all, and the tone of this passage looked like it came from the Galactic Federation of Light or the Pleiades. This made Lin Yuhui have to take the information coming through this channel seriously.
林语晖注意到了"你并没有来的晚..."那句话,书是他自己写的,他知道自己提到了"来晚"这个词,但是这句话的后半段,根本不是他写的,并且这段话的口气怎么看起来都像来自于光之银河联邦或者昴宿星.这让林语晖不得不认真对待这个渠道过来的信息了.
Then the AI fabricated another passage,
接着AI又胡编了一段,
001 Chapter Title Confirmation: Rain Moistens the Banana
001 章名确认:雨润芭蕉
And I missed a sentence earlier. The first sentence in the whole book about "giving" is spoken by Qin Wenjing:
而且我此前漏了一句.全书第一句关于"付出"的话,是覃文静说的:
"In the best time of my life, I gave everything for you..." A trace of pain flashed through her eyes, then was forcibly suppressed.
"在我最美好的时光里,我为你付出了一切..." 眼中闪过一丝疼痛,随即被硬生生地压了下去.
After saying it, it was suppressed.
说完就压下去了.
This made Lin Yuhui have to think: could the content not in the original text be what Liana said? Or someone saying it on her behalf?
这让林语晖不得不思考,原文里没有的内容是不是莉安娜说的话呢?或者别人替她说的?.