I think this thing has gotten boring in the end, even me started to get bored from just writing it. Although the idea is appealing and good to implement but for a fanfic that's not the right way. It's good as original story not as a fanfic, so I think i will drop it and, wirte my dirty thoughts into another fanfic like the previous one, just hope to make it right this time.
You know, trial and error.