This is my long rant regarding this work.
This chapter marks the end of my experimental phase so moving forward, I'll try to stay as consistent as possible mainly in writing style. As for chapter lengths, some chapters will be shorter than the others because of redundant info all based on the original.
And moving forward, I will embrace this as more of a slow paced novel, considering mc haven't moved close to releasing his first work for mass audience at this point. I did try to trim short many stuff but I've realized it felt like eating bones upon rereading it so I'll instead be focusing on staying coherent.
With that said, there will be a brief hiatus to reconstruct the whole story, as there are too many historical inaccuracies to just cover it up.
And last but not least, if I've made bad judgments pls let me know. Feedbacks and critiques are welcomed.
P.S I'm eager to improve as I want to start my own novel.