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The whispers in the opulent gallery grew louder, layering over one another like the flutter of restless wings. Each murmur echoed the dread coiling tight in the center of Serena's chest. The hall was drenched in golden light, its chandeliers spilling brilliance over lacquered floors and velvet ropes, over guests clad in silk and superiority. The air carried the faint, intoxicating blend of old oil paint, polished wood, and the metallic edge of rising scandal.
Ms. De Laurent stood at the heart of it all, the eye of the storm—impeccably dressed, perfectly poised, her expression a careful embroidery of elegance and disdain. She watched Serena with a faint, condescending smile that made something cold and dangerous rise in Serena's bloodstream.
"So what you're implying here, Ms. De Laurent…" Serena began, her voice a low, controlled thread of sound. It was a tone she had learned to wield like a blade—soft, but honed with precision. "…is that the painting my family owns is a forgery."
Ms. De Laurent didn't flinch. Her hand, graced by a single emerald the size of a raindrop but bright as a spotlight, rested lightly over her heart, a gesture so performative Serena nearly scoffed.
"I'm simply being realistic," she replied, her voice maddeningly calm. Every syllable sounded like an adult correcting a foolish child.
Serena's gaze narrowed. Under the harsh gallery lights, her eyes looked almost luminous, like polished silver just before the strike. The Dancer's Ascent—the painting now at the center of the battlefield—was not just an artwork. It was heritage, memory, bloodline. Her family had guarded it like a sacred flame for decades. To call it fake wasn't merely insulting—it was an attempt to erase her.
"Then perhaps," Serena said, inhaling deeply as she reached down to the velvet-lined carrying case at her side, "I should provide a more detailed explanation."
Her fingers brushed the familiar texture of the old case, and with it came the flicker of memory—her mother, young and glowing, kneeling beside her as they opened it for the first time. The vivid colors of the painting had seemed to dance even then, before Serena truly understood their worth.
"This painting was commissioned by my mother as a gift to me," she announced clearly, her voice slicing clean through the room's buzzing tension. Heads turned. Conversations died. All eyes were drawn to her, like iron to a magnet. A flash of color—gold swirling with lavender—rose in her mind, the memory of the dancer mid-leap, suspended in eternal ascension.
"As such, there can be no mistake. This painting has been mine from its inception."
A ripple of startled murmurs rolled through the crowd.
"So her mother commissioned it? Then it can't be a fake, right?" someone whispered too loudly.
"Does that mean the gallery's is the forgery?" another hissed back, not quietly enough.
Ms. De Laurent allowed the crowd's suspicions to rise but refused to let her own composure crack. Her smile remained thin, sharpened, deliberate.
"In that case," she said, tilting her head just slightly, "you must have a copy of the letter of commission your mother sent to Marianne Dessaint."
The temperature in the room shifted again. The crowd inhaled collectively, drawn back into anticipation like a tide pulled by the moon.
Serena could feel their eyes—hungry, expectant, ready for either vindication or blood. The burden of truth now rested squarely on her shoulders.
Her fingers tightened on the document case. She knew what lay inside. She knew the story better than anyone. And yet the silence stretched, taut as a violin string.
"That's…" She let the word trail off intentionally, allowing the hush to deepen, allowing everyone to lean closer. Then she lifted her chin, reclaiming her authority.
"As far as I know," she continued, "Marianne Dessaint was the one who first offered to paint it… to thank my mother for her patronage."
The shift was subtle but significant. A commissioned gift was still a commission—but the lack of a formal request created just enough ambiguity to make the document harder to challenge. Harder to predict. Harder for Ms. De Laurent to attack.
And Serena wasn't afraid. She had the documents. She had the truth. But more importantly—she understood the battlefield.
Because this confrontation was never truly about art. Not about provenance. Not even about Marianne Dessaint.
It was about power.
About the legitimacy of the Laurent family's place in high society… and their quiet, relentless attempt to drag Serena down.
She met Ms. De Laurent's gaze head-on, her expression smooth, cold, resolute.
The game had begun in earnest.
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Ms. De Laurent maintained her elegant, predatory smile—the kind that looked refined from a distance but revealed sharpened teeth up close.
"To thank your mother for her patronage," she echoed, each word dipped in a quiet, poisonous skepticism. "How generous of her. However," she continued smoothly, "my mother wanted to pay a fair price in exchange for the painting."
The implication was clear: transactions require records. Gifts do not.
Serenity felt the pressure coiling around her like a tightening thread. She had to close the loophole before Ms. De Laurent widened it into a noose.
"The gift was a gesture of goodwill," Serenity said, keeping her voice controlled, steady—though she could feel dozens of eyes tracking her every blink. "So there was no formal contract or letter of commission as people exchange these days. The only proof is the painter's signature on the back of the painting."
De Laurent's eyebrow lifted in a perfect arc, sculpted and merciless. Her expression held a false, pitying softness—an actress feigning compassion before burying the blade.
"I see," she murmured, savoring the moment. "So you do not have a letter of commission… or any other official paperwork regarding that painting." She sighed, theatrically disappointed. "That's unfortunate."
A hush fell over the onlookers, the weight of her words settling like a velvet shroud over the room. They smelled weakness. In this world, lacking documentation was akin to lacking credibility.
Serenity's gaze dipped for only a fleeting second.
I'm not lying, she reminded herself fiercely. But the truth, without the armor of proof, was fragile—too easily crushed under the heel of a well-placed accusation.
Ms. De Laurent, seeing the shift, struck again.
"I," she began with polished confidence, "can provide any documentation or evidence you may wish to see, Ms. Serenity. Whether it is the certificate of authenticity issued by the Art Association when I purchased Marianne Dessaint's studio…" She opened her folder with a crisp, triumphant flick. "…or the testimonial of the former studio employee who personally oversaw this painting from the moment I discovered it."
Her poise was flawless. Her certainty, absolute. The crowd murmured approvingly; paper was power, after all.
Serenity felt the disadvantage rising like a cold tide. She had tried to anchor her claim in memory, in legacy, in the artist's own hand—but Ms. De Laurent was offering the currency society trusted most: documentation. Endorsed, stamped, notarized.
And yet… facts on paper could be forged just as easily as brushstrokes.
"Very well, Ms. Serenity," De Laurent concluded, as though closing a debate she had already won. Her smile said, Checkmate.
But Serenity was not finished. She inhaled once—quiet, short, steadying. Then she lifted her head with a clarity that felt like glass catching light.
"In that case," Serenity said, her voice cutting through the murmurs like a bell, "let us have the two paintings authenticated."
The effect was immediate. De Laurent's smile wavered—just for a fraction of a second, but enough for the crowd to sense it. Enough for Serenity to see she'd struck true.
"Having them both re-examined for authenticity," Serenity continued, seizing the shift, "would be a far more reliable means of determining which one is genuine than examining documents from one party alone, would it not?"
She let that sink in before delivering the final blow.
"Whoever is proven to possess the forgery," she said, "can take responsibility for the exchange we just had here."
There it was—the glittering, gilt-edged threat.
Not shouted. Not dramatized. Quiet, polite, devastating.
The crowd inhaled sharply. This was no longer a disagreement. It was a duel, one that risked more than pride—reputation, influence, social survival.
A slow, thrilling smile curved across Ms. De Laurent's lips—not condescending this time, but genuine. The smile of a woman who relished high stakes and believed she would emerge victorious.
She inclined her head with elegant finality.
"Let us do that, then."
And just like that, the battlefield shifted. It was no longer a war of words or documents, but a trial by truth—brushstroke against brushstroke, pigment against pigment.
The game of reputation had evolved into an official, irreversible contest.
The truth of the painting—buried under decades of history, pride, and clashing legacies—would finally be unearthed.
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📰 The Ballerina's Faux Pas – Expanded Novel Version
Part I: The Gallery Duel
The velvet ropes gleamed beneath the gallery's lights, casting thin shadows across the polished marble floor. The room was alive—buzzing with hushed speculation, strained politeness, and the brittle tension that comes before a public downfall. Serena stood in the center of it all, poised yet burning, the legacy of her family resting squarely upon her shoulders.
Her rival, Ms. De Laurent, mirrored her stance with infuriating serenity. The woman's smile—sharp, deliberate, and lacquered with superiority—cut deeper than any spoken insult.
"So what you're implying here, Ms. De Laurent…" Serena began, her voice a low, dangerous whisper that somehow carried across the room. "…is that the painting my family owns is a forgery."
"I'm simply being realistic," Ms. De Laurent replied. Smooth. Effortless. Deadly. Her tone dripped with the sort of politeness that could suffocate a person.
A flicker of pain flashed behind Serena's violet eyes—pain quickly swallowed, replaced by steel. She lifted her chin, recalling the warm glow of her mother's smile, the sunlight spilling across a young Serena as they admired the still-drying painting. The Dancer's Ascent. A gift. A memory. A truth.
"Then perhaps I should provide a more detailed explanation," Serena said, steadying her breath. "This painting was commissioned by my mother as a gift to me. As such, there can be no mistake. This painting has been mine from its inception."
A ripple of whispers spread across the spectators.
"So her mother commissioned it? Then it can't be fake—right?"
"If that's true… doesn't that make the gallery's version the forgery?"
Ms. De Laurent's expression sharpened.
"In that case," she said slowly, savoring every syllable, "you must have a copy of the letter of commission your mother sent to Marianne Dessaint."
A direct blow.
Serena hesitated.
"That's…" A breath. A flicker of panic. A calculation.
"As far as I know," she continued carefully, "Marianne Dessaint was the one who first offered to paint it… to thank my mother for her patronage."
A subtle pivot—too subtle for the crowd, but not for Ms. De Laurent.
Serena pressed on, her voice resolute. "The gesture was goodwill, not a formal commission. The only proof is the painter's signature on the back of the painting."
De Laurent's eyes glinted like polished glass.
"Hm. So you do not have a letter of commission or any other documentation regarding that painting," she concluded with feigned sympathy. "How… unfortunate."
The fabric of the crowd tightened, its collective judgment already shifting.
Then De Laurent produced her arsenal—sleek folders filled with certificates, association seals, notarized statements.
"I can provide any documentation or evidence you wish to see, Ms. Serenity," she said, savoring the title. "Certificates of authenticity. Testimonies from employees who handled the painting. Everything related to Marianne Dessaint's studio."
Her voice was silk layered over iron.
Serena's pulse thundered. She could not win the duel of documents. But she could still win the truth.
She straightened.
"Then let us have the two paintings authenticated."
A murmur swept through the gallery like a gust of wind.
Serena continued, her voice gaining momentum:
"Having them both re-examined for authenticity is far more reliable than relying on documents from one party. Wouldn't you agree?"
A beat of silence.
"Whoever is proven to possess the forgery," she said evenly, "can take responsibility for the exchange we just had here."
The threat was clear. Elegant. And lethal.
For the first time, Ms. De Laurent's smile flickered.
Just for a second.
Then it returned—slower, broader, more dangerous.
"Very well, Ms. Serenity," she said with a graceful nod. "Let us do that, then."
The duel was official.
The crowd crackled with anticipation.
The truth—the real truth—would soon be exposed.
Serena's office felt cavernous in its silence—an oppressive contrast to the crowded, heated chaos of the gallery. The city lights outside glittered mockingly, casting fractured reflections across her glass desk.
Crumpled newspapers littered the surface like battlefield debris.
DU DUN.
The headline blasted from the front page of the MACKIN newspaper:
"Serenity Hotel vs. De Laurent Gallery:
Marianne Dessaint's 'Ballerina' Sparks Authenticity Debate."
And below it, the dagger:
"Could it be a bold-faced lie from the head of Serenity Hotel?"
Serena—now dressed down in a white robe, hair loose and disheveled—gripped the paper so tightly the ink smudged.
"McKINSEY… those jerks!"
She tore the page in half.
"Ugh! Everything is so infuriating today!"
RIP. RIP. RIP.
"Aaaargh!"
Shreds of newsprint fluttered across the carpet.
She collapsed back in her chair, pressing a trembling hand against her forehead. Her heart pounded with a mix of outrage and humiliation.
"I can't believe the predicament I'm in," she muttered. "I need a drink. I deserve a drink."
Her thoughts spiraled faster than she could calm them.
"Did they hire someone to stalk me or something? OBSCENITY PROFANITY!"
She slammed her fist onto the desk.
"How do they publish these articles so quickly?! It's only been a day! This is exactly like what they did during the affair with the poet—always first, always twisted!"
The sting burned deeper because the narrative had already turned against her.
"What's irritating," she whispered bitterly, "is that because the gallery has proof… it looks like I'm the one lying."
She shut her eyes tight, humiliation swelling hot in her chest.
And then—another wound reopening:
"That Diah woman insulted me and my mother in public… called us laypeople."
Her jaw clenched.
"How dare she?"
The room felt suffocating.
She inhaled sharply, sitting upright again.
Her reputation—her family's name—was dangling over a precipice.
The authenticity challenge she had issued was no longer a strategic move.
It was a lifeline.
She had agreed to the test.
Now she had to win.
The confrontation in the gallery lingered in Serena's mind like a stubborn afterimage burned into her vision. Even in the sanctuary of her private estate, she could still hear the echo of the crowd's whispers, still feel the razor-sharp edge of Ms. De Laurent's smile cutting into her pride.
"So what you're implying here, Ms. De Laurent… is that the painting my family owns is a forgery."
Her own voice replayed, steady on the outside, trembling beneath the surface.
De Laurent's answer had sliced through her composure with surgical precision.
"I'm simply being realistic."
Serena had fought back, summoning the golden memory of her mother's gentle voice, her perfume, the way she lightly rested a hand on Serena's shoulder as they admired the fresh painting all those years ago.
"This painting was commissioned by my mother as a gift to me. As such, there can be no mistake."
But De Laurent pounced. "Then you must have a copy of the letter of commission."
That single question had cracked the foundation of Serena's carefully preserved truth. There had been no letter—only goodwill, patronage, and the tender bond between artist and supporter. But goodwill was not evidence, and sentiment was not documentation.
"That's…" She had stumbled, deflecting, reframing. It had not saved her.
The humiliation—sharp, hot, public—followed her all the way home.
The soft clink of glass against the marble countertop broke the suffocating silence of Serena's private bar. She uncorked a bottle of pink liqueur with a sharp twist.
I need a drink. I can't believe the predicament I'm in.
She poured generously, the liquid shimmering like melted rose petals under the low light. For the first time in a long while, she was drinking alone.
A strange, lonely habit.
A habit tied to a man.
I first started drinking after Frederick began working for me…
The memory surfaced uninvited: Frederick at the masquerade, his mask a stark contrast to his unreadable expression. While she had laughed, danced, and sipped champagne with reckless abandon, he had watched from the periphery—stone sober, eyes sharp as a hawk's.
He had always imposed that odd rule:
"Never drink when I'm not around."
The words resurfaced now, echoing through her mind like a warning.
Do I make a fool of myself whenever I drink?
She tightened her grip on the bottle, the glass cold against her palm.
"CLENCH."
"Well, I'm sure it'll be all right," she muttered to no one. "I'm at home."
But the lie settled uneasily in her chest.
The evening deepened outside the wide windows—twilight swallowing the horizon with ink-black shadows. It matched her mood too perfectly.
Her next thought came quietly, brutally:
"…I can't be alone with Frederick anymore."
The admission stole the air from her lungs. It was more confession than thought—raw, vulnerable, frighteningly real.
She didn't have time to examine it.
A presence shifted behind her, slicing through the solitude like a blade.
Serena stiffened.
Someone was standing in the doorway.
A tall man in a crisp waistcoat and tie—broad-shouldered, immaculate, impossibly composed. His hair caught faint glints of evening blue, and his eyes—those piercing, frost-touched eyes—fixed on the bottle in her hand.
Eiser.
The sight of him jolted her like cold water.
"Why are you drinking alone?" he asked.
His voice was low, steady—carrying more concern than reprimand, yet unmistakably edged with both. The sound of it reached her first, then the weight of his stare.
It felt like he could see right through her.
"Eiser?" she breathed, her surprise unguarded. The bottle nearly slipped from her fingers.
He stepped further into the room, shadows folding behind him like a cloak. The closeness unsettled her in a way she couldn't explain.
"What… what are you doing here?" she stammered. She hadn't meant to sound so shaken, but the question tumbled out before she could compose herself.
He didn't answer immediately. Instead, he glanced pointedly at the half-fi