The silence in the grand hall pressed down on everyone, heavy and suffocating, broken only by the steady, rhythmic DRIP… DRIP of my blood onto the polished table. It was a metronome of tension, each drop marking the unspoken warning: I was far from done.
Every eye shifted repeatedly—first to me, then to my mangled hand, then back to the cold, implacable expression on my face. The shock in the room began to twist into unease, and then fear.
The woman in the red dress—once so poised, so certain—was visibly shaken. She flinched, swallowed hard, the sharp GULP audible in the charged silence. Her composure cracked like a brittle veneer. I could feel her terror radiating outward, mirrored in the hesitant movements of everyone else in the room.
"I'm the one who arranged this meeting," I said, my voice low and dangerous, a growl that demanded undivided attention, "and I'll be the one to call an end to it."
A group of men and women, who had been edging toward the doors, froze mid-step, their faces blanching.
"S-so much blood…" one whispered, voice trembling, eyes wide with disbelief.
The woman in red—her red gown almost glowing under the harsh light—finally found her voice, thin, forced, a fragile attempt at calm.
"Ms. Serenity… we've determined the authenticity of both paintings. Isn't that enough?"
I fixed her with a gaze sharp enough to cut glass, piercing through the illusion of composure she clung to.
"Enough? Hardly."
The words fell like stones, heavy and deliberate, just as my blood fell from my hand.
"If all I wanted was the results of the authentication, a simple phone call would have sufficed," I continued, letting the gravity of my statement sink into every corner of the hall.
I let my gaze sweep across the stunned faces, letting the weight of my words land. The throb in my injured hand was constant, sharp—a reminder of both the physical and emotional blows I had endured.
"Why would I have wasted everyone's valuable time by insisting that we all gather here today?" My voice rose slightly, each word crisp, deliberate. "What of the insults my family endured before the authenticity of the paintings was established?"
The murmurs began to rise, hesitant at first, then swelling. I silenced them with a single, icy look, my eyes fixed unerringly on the woman in red—Ms. De Laurent.
Slowly, deliberately, I reached for a stack of newspapers on the nearby table. My bloodied fingers tore through the headlines as I picked them up, smearing ink and crimson together in a visceral display.
"Regrettably, I have not received any form of apology," I said, letting each syllable drip with controlled fury. "Although the reputation of both myself and my hotel suffered a significant blow due to the influx of misleading, biased articles falsely claiming that my painting was a forgery."
I lifted the newspaper high, letting the articles about the scandal unfold before everyone's eyes. My gaze remained locked on hers, unwavering, burning with unrelenting fire.
"On that day, Ms. De Laurent, you called my painting a fake in front of a large group of people," I said, enunciating each word, letting the accusation linger and echo.
My voice dropped lower, deeper, sharp and dangerous:
"While infuriating, I can understand why people are treating this incident as little more than an entertaining story to prattle on about."
I paused, letting the statement settle in the heavy air, daring anyone to contradict me.
"That being said," I continued, steel threading through every word, "I won't sit here and let the person who caused all this grief in the first place simply brush the matter off without a word."
I crumpled the newspaper in my bloodied hand; the CRUNCH and RUSTLE of paper echoed ominously in the stillness.
My gaze, unwavering, met Ms. De Laurent's once more, sharp, unforgiving.
"I will not forget the indignity I was subjected to that day so easily."
The meeting was far from over.
It was time for accountability.
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The silence was total, broken only by the faint, insistent DRIP of blood from my hand onto the ornate table. Each drop seemed to echo in the vast, hushed room, commanding attention. Every gaze was fixed on me; I could feel their eyes burn into my skin, simultaneously horrified and fascinated. I was not relinquishing control—not now, not ever.
"I'm the one who arranged for this meeting, and I will be the one to call its end." My words landed with deliberate precision. The woman who had tried to curtail the event—the official—gave a nervous FLINCH, her composure cracking, and a hard GULP betrayed her uncertainty. Around us, the people who had been attempting to slip out remained FROZEN, whispering faintly, "S-so much blood…" as if the sight itself had rooted them in place.
Ms. De Laurent, ever the emblem of poise, attempted to regain control, her voice careful but firm. "Ms. Serenity. We've determined the authenticity of both paintings. Isn't that enough?"
I clenched my jaw, every muscle taut as I felt the jagged pain in my palm—a stark, physical reminder of the stakes. "Enough?" I echoed, my voice low and sharp. "Hardly. If all I had desired was the results of the authentication, a simple phone call would have sufficed."
The blood continued its steady DRIP onto the rich velvet cloth, each drop an unspoken accusation.
"Why would I have summoned all of you here, wasting your time, if it were only about authentication?" I gestured broadly with the crumpled newspapers in my uninjured hand, the black-and-white headlines stark and accusatory. "What of the insults my family endured before anyone even knew the truth of these paintings?"
I let my eyes sweep across the assembled guests, letting the weight of my grievance hang in the air like a tangible pressure. "Regrettably, I have not received even a semblance of an apology… despite the damage inflicted upon both my reputation and that of my hotel, all due to misleading and biased articles falsely claiming that my painting was a forgery."
I straightened, drawing myself up as though to measure my contempt in inches. My gaze fixed on Ms. De Laurent, sharp and unyielding. "On that day, Ms. De Laurent, you called my painting a fake—right there, in front of all those people."
A shiver passed through the room. The atmosphere, already taut, seemed to constrict further, the air thick with anticipation.
"While I understand that such a scene might amuse onlookers, reduce it to a story to gossip about… I will not permit the person responsible for such humiliation to simply brush it aside without acknowledgment."
I let the newspapers slip from my fingers onto the table, the sound of paper hitting wood a small, yet deliberate punctuation in the heavy silence. "We could have quietly verified the paintings, as we both know. But no—you turned it into fodder for public scandal, deliberately defaming not only me but my hotel."
My voice dropped, thick with a bitterness that had been simmering for months. "And as if that were not enough, you dared to belittle both me and my mother in front of our peers, dismissing us as laypeople unworthy of understanding art."
I allowed my gaze to wander across the audience, letting each person feel the sting of my accusation. "I suppose it would be unfair to call either myself or my experts laypeople, given that neither of us received formal education in art… but that does not excuse the director of the largest gallery in Meuracevia to…"
I turned back to Ms. De Laurent, my eyes blazing with personal indignation. "…to deem my mother—who possessed a discerning eye, who recognized talent in artists long before anyone else—a mere amateur, simply because she had no formal training."
The weight of my words extended to the audience. "Does that mean, then, that every visitor to your gallery, who comes not to lecture but to observe, not to prove their knowledge but to appreciate art… are they too, in your estimation, ignorant laypeople?"
I leaned forward, the room shrinking with the force of my presence. A few guests instinctively began to SCRIBBLE notes, their pens scratching desperately to keep up with the intensity.
"Furthermore," I continued, letting the final barb land with precision, "you claimed to recognize Marianne Dessaint's talent and purchased her studio in full—yet this was only after my mother had already discerned that very same potential. A layperson, you said? And yet, her judgment preceded yours."
The sound of SCRIBBLEing intensified, mingling with the quiet thrum of tension that filled the room. I fixed Ms. De Laurent with a glare so cutting it might have carved through marble.
"Isn't that correct?"
The words hung in the air. I would not forget the indignity I had suffered that day—not now, not ever. The ball was clearly back in her court, and she had no easy answer left.
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The woman in red, Ms. De Laurent, finally spoke, her polished composure fracturing under the unyielding pressure of my gaze. Her carefully crafted poise began to splinter, revealing the tension she had so meticulously concealed.
"I believe the agreement was for the person found to be in possession of a fake to take responsibility." Her voice was tight, taut like a wire ready to snap, as she attempted to twist the narrative back into her favor. "It was concluded that both paintings were genuine… so why are you insisting that one of us take responsibility?"
I smiled, though it was a cold, humorless expression that didn't reach my eyes. The blood from my injured hand glistened faintly on the ornate table, a silent yet potent symbol of the price paid for her arrogance—a subtle warning to everyone present.
"I see you don't understand my meaning. Let me clarify." My tone was calm, deliberate, and cruelly precise. I let the pause stretch long enough for the weight of my next statement to settle over the room, hanging heavy in the charged silence. Even my brother, leaning casually against the wall with his arms crossed, looked on with a sharp GLANCE of keen interest, his dark eyes reflecting the thrill of the unfolding confrontation.
"Although the two paintings are by the same artist and appear identical at first glance," I continued, each word deliberate, "the meaning underlying each is fundamentally different." I gestured subtly toward the artworks, letting the room's attention follow my motion. "One is a draft—a precursor, a stepping stone. The other is the completed vision, the fully realized work. They cannot, by definition, be the same."
My voice rose, reverberating through the grand hall, bouncing off the high ceilings and ornate chandeliers. The murmurs of the guests, once hushed and tentative, stilled completely. Every eye was fixed upon me, drawn to the intensity of my presence.
"I asked everyone here today not merely to witness authentication," I said, letting the words hang, heavy with implication. "I asked you here to recognize which of the two paintings holds true value."
It wasn't about validation. It had never been about that. The real aim had always been dominance, the revelation of a fundamental flaw in her judgment—a trap laid with precision long before she had stepped into this room.
I turned my gaze back to Ms. De Laurent, feeling the shift in her posture, the slight tremor in her hands, the pale hue creeping into her cheeks. Her confidence, once impenetrable, was dissolving under the relentless scrutiny of truth.
"I think everyone here now has a clear understanding of whose work is the genuine article," I said, my voice low, dangerous, and undeniable. "So, tell me… will you admit responsibility for your baseless claims?"
Across the room, my brother leaned back slightly, a shadow of a smirk tugging at the corners of his mouth. He said nothing, of course, but his posture spoke volumes: the faint rise of one eyebrow, the calm calculation in his eyes. The surrounding MURMURs of the assembled guests added to the undeniable verdict forming in the room.
The official, the one who had so clumsily tried to end the meeting prematurely, now looked utterly defeated. The situation had slipped completely from his control, and his futile attempts at authority were transparent to everyone present.
Meanwhile, Ms. De Laurent—'Diah,' as my brother privately thought of her—was trapped, every angle of escape methodically cut off by her own arrogance and misjudgment.
From his vantage point, eyes gleamed with silent amusement. A faint smile curved his lips as he silently noted:
DIAH FELL COMPLETELY INTO THE PRINCESS'S TRAP.
IT WILL BE DIFFICULT FOR HER TO EXTRICATE HERSELF FROM THIS.
I felt a small, sharp satisfaction knowing that my efforts had yielded fruit, but my focus remained entirely on the woman in red. I tightened my grip—not on the glass, no longer a mere prop, but on the conversation itself, the threads of control now firmly in my hands.
I stared at Ms. De Laurent, letting the crimson stain on my palm serve as a grim testament to the gravity of this confrontation. "Do not forget the promise you made to me," I said, my voice steady but heavy with consequence.
The DRIP, DRIP of blood continued to punctuate the room. Each drop was a reminder: the promise of accountability had been sealed with her pride, and now, with my blood. She had nowhere left to run.
The tension in the hall had become suffocating, thick enough to choke on. I stood over the shattered remnants of the wine glass, each ruby-stained shard glittering like evidence against her. My eyes never left Ms. De Laurent. I had laid out my case in full—her arrogance, her elitism, her recklessness—and now the truth sat bare and ugly at her feet.
The crowd wasn't quietly SCRIBBLEing anymore; they'd moved past that.
Now they exchanged sharp, urgent MURMURs, their heads close together, their pens pausing mid-air as they began to NOD in agreement.
From near the door, a woman clapped a hand over her mouth in shock, whispering loudly enough for everyone to hear, "WOW… YOU COULD CUT THE TENSION IN HERE WITH A KNIFE. EVEN I'M FEELING NERVOUS."
Another guest leaned toward her, his eyes wide with awe.
"WHAT A FORMIDABLE WOMAN MS. SERENITY IS!"
Their words flowed through the room like fuel, each comment adding fire to the atmosphere. I didn't need their approval—but I welcomed the weight it placed on Ms. De Laurent's shoulders.
She finally broke her stare, turning her face aside as if the gaze of the entire hall burned too hot. Her perfectly composed mask was gone, replaced with mortified rage and raw humiliation. She knew she had been cornered—by her own claims, by her own elitist proclamations, by the very definition of authentic she wielded so carelessly.
When she forced her gaze back to me, her voice cracked.
"I'll be made a mockery… regardless of whether I agree or remain silent."
She swallowed, understanding that the whispers were already rewriting her reputation.
She saw her social ruin unfolding in real time.
Her eyes lifted, trembling at the edges.
"...What is it that you want?"
Ah. There it was.
Submission.
My voice dropped back into the tone that had silenced the entire hall—the low, commanding cadence that allowed no refusal.
"Now that there is no doubt which painting is truly genuine…" I began, each word deliberate, heavy, "…there is no need for a copy to exist."
The color drained from her face.
She understood what I was asking.
No—what I was demanding.
I watched as she made a quick, panicked SPIN, placing both hands on the table, steadying herself against the polished mahogany surface. There, resting between scattered documents and glass shards, lay a small, ornate letter opener—a knife of sorts, decorative but sharp enough to cleave paper cleanly.
Her gaze flicked to it. Her fingers hovered, hesitating.
A flicker of some desperate, reckless idea crossed her face—a last attempt at reclaiming control, or perhaps destroying it before I could order her.
But my eyes locked onto hers, unblinking, unrelenting.
My final demand slid out like a verdict:
"DESTROY IT."
The words cracked through the hall like a blade against stone.
I leaned forward, my expression carved from cold fury, emphasizing each syllable:
"RIGHT. HERE. RIGHT. NOW. AS I WATCH."
Her mouth parted in a tremor of disbelief.
Her golden eyes widened, the horror sinking in.
I delivered the last blow, my voice ringing with absolute authority:
"RIP IT UP YOURSELF."
The humiliation awaiting her was total. Public. Irrevocable.
She had tried to end my name and insult my family.
Now she stood on the edge of her own collapse, forced to tear apart the very thing she flaunted as her victory.
There was no escape.
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The air in the hall was almost suffocating, heavy with the weight of my command. Every heartbeat seemed magnified, every breath a silent drum of anticipation. My words still lingered, reverberating through the ornate room:
"RIP IT UP YOURSELF."
I watched Ms. De Laurent carefully, tracing the full spectrum of emotions that flickered across her face. First came rage, hot and burning, a storm behind her golden eyes. Then disbelief, sharp and incredulous, as if my audacity had physically struck her. And finally, the slow, suffocating inevitability of helpless defeat. She was trapped—by her own pride, her own words, and now by the undeniable truth.
Her hands trembled as they reached for the letter opener resting on the mahogany table. I could see every flicker of hesitation, the silent calculation of a mind trying desperately to claw back control. But she did not strike at me. No, that would have been far too easy—and far too human. Instead, she turned sharply, her movements jerky and almost panicked, and lunged toward her own painting.
The masterpiece she had once paraded with pride—the symbol of her authority and her triumph—now stood revealed as nothing more than a draft.
The moment her hands made contact with the canvas, the tearing sound erupted: a final, pathetic WET RRRIP, reverberating like the snap of a whip. The crowd flinched, the sound slicing through the thick tension as if it were a blade.
It was done.
I remained impassive, my expression carefully neutral as I observed her standing there, momentarily frozen by the destruction she had wrought. The room, which had been taut with anticipation and dread, finally seemed to SNAP, releasing its collective breath in a shudder of disbelief.
The other officials, who had remained rigidly FROZEN in their seats, reacted at last. They rushed to her side, their movements anxious and clumsy, their murmurs frantic.
"MS. DE LAURENT!" they gasped, their voices tight with horror and disbelief.
The act of destruction was complete. Yet, even after the canvas had been shredded, Ms. De Laurent's gaze remained locked on me. It was a SHARP, venomous stare—part hatred, part grudging respect, and part the realization that she had been thoroughly outmaneuvered.
With a flick of her wrist, she tossed the letter opener back onto the table. The metallic CLATTER sounded weak and hollow in the vast, tense room, a faint echo of the brutal tearing of her canvas.
"…I—I hope you're satisfied, Ms. Serenity." Her voice trembled, venom lacing the words, and she spat my name like a curse meant to wound.
I did not flinch. I did not blink. I let the victorious chill in my eyes speak for me. My hand, still slick with blood, rested lightly on the table, a silent testament to the intensity of the confrontation and the price paid fo