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Chapter 18 - KINKTOBER DAY 17: Performance Review [Kafka x Himeko] SMUT

The silence on the Astral Express was a rare and precious commodity. It was a soft, humming quiet, the gentle thrum of the star rail singing its endless, lonely song through the carriage walls. In Himeko's parlor car, a sanctuary of polished wood, old books, and the rich, dark aroma of brewing coffee, that silence was a carefully cultivated art form.

Tonight, the art was being actively, and delightfully, vandalized.

"I'm bored."

The pronouncement came from Kafka, who was draped over a plush velvet armchair with the boneless, elegant grace of a predator feigning sleep. She had been a "guest" on the Express for three days, a situation born of a bizarre, temporary truce and a great deal of Himeko's own, unreadable diplomatic maneuvering. She was a beautiful, ticking bomb in the heart of their home, and she knew it.

Himeko didn't look up from the delicate, hand cranked grinder she was using to prepare her evening coffee. The rhythmic crunch of beans was a metronome of her calm. "And I am busy, Kafka. If you are bored, there is a comprehensive library of interstellar literature two carriages down. I'm sure you could find a new way to terrorize a fictional population."

A low, throaty chuckle was the only reply. It was a sound that promised both danger and delight. "Fictional populations are so… predictable. They lack your particular brand of unflappable, infuriating calm." Kafka's legs uncurled, her high heeled boots tapping a restless, impatient rhythm on the polished floor. She rose and began to orbit Himeko's space, a satellite drawn into an irresistible gravity. "Come on, Himeko. Play with me. Just one little game."

"I am not one of your toys," Himeko said, her voice still even as she measured the fragrant, dark grounds into a pour over filter. "And I do not 'play'."

"Oh, but you do," Kafka purred, stopping directly behind her, so close that Himeko could feel the warmth of her body. She leaned in, her lips nearly brushing the shell of Himeko's ear, her voice a conspiratorial whisper laced with spider silk. "You play the biggest game of all. You collect strays, you navigate the impossible, you hold this little family of trailblazers together with nothing but a steady hand and a well brewed cup of coffee. You are the ultimate strategist. And I want to see you lose your composure. Just once."

She let her hands rest lightly on Himeko's shoulders, feeling the fine, strong muscle beneath the fabric of her blouse. "I'll make you a wager. If I can make you spill that coffee, if I can make that steady hand of yours tremble, you have to do whatever I want for one hour."

Himeko paused, the kettle of hot water held perfectly still in her hand. For a moment, the only sound was the low hum of the Express. Then, she let out a soft, considering hum of her own. "An interesting proposal," she said, her voice laced with an amusement that was more dangerous than any anger. She turned her head slightly, her eyes meeting Kafka's violet ones over her shoulder. "But the terms are unbalanced. You risk nothing. I risk my dignity and a perfectly good cup of coffee."

She turned back, beginning to pour the water in a slow, perfect spiral, the grounds blooming and releasing their rich scent. "So, here is my counter offer. You wish to see me break my composure? Then you must earn it. I find the concept of service… fascinating. The complete and utter devotion of one being to the pleasure and comfort of another. It is a state you, with your chaotic self interest, could never comprehend."

She set the kettle down, the coffee now dripping slowly into the carafe below. "Prove to me that you can serve, Kafka. Genuinely. Without tricks, without manipulation. Serve me, attend to my needs, anticipate my desires. If you can do that, if you can show me one moment of true, selfless service… then perhaps I will grant you the prize you seek. Perhaps I will let you see me 'unflappable' no more."

Kafka stared at her, a slow, predatory smile spreading across her face. This was better than she could have imagined. Himeko hadn't just accepted the game; she had defined the board. And it was a board Kafka was more than willing to play on. The prize was no longer just a reaction; it was an admission, a surrender.

"Alright, Navigator," Kafka breathed, her voice a low, thrilling promise. She moved to stand before Himeko, her gaze intense. "You have a deal. Prepare to be served."

The first phase of Kafka's "service" was a masterpiece of bratty, theatrical incompetence. She insisted on pouring the coffee, her movements exaggeratedly graceful, her hips swaying in a hypnotic rhythm. She presented the cup to Himeko with a flourish that threatened to send the hot liquid sloshing over the rim. Himeko simply took it, her hand as steady as a rock, her expression one of polite, unimpressed patience.

"You're trying too hard to be seen, Kafka," Himeko observed, taking a slow, appreciative sip. "Service is not a performance. It is an act of quiet anticipation."

Frustrated, Kafka moved behind her, her hands settling on Himeko's shoulders. "A massage, then? To ease the burdens of your command." Her fingers, so skilled with her violin and her blades, began to knead the tense muscles of Himeko's shoulders. But her touch was a provocation. Her thumbs would press just a little too hard, her fingers would stray a little too close to the sensitive skin of Himeko's neck, a ghost of a touch meant to distract, not relax.

"Your technique is crude," Himeko critiqued calmly, her eyes closed. "You are thinking about the effect, not the cause. You seek a reaction, you do not seek to provide relief. You are fundamentally too selfish for this."

The words, so clinical and so true, struck a nerve. The game was no longer fun. It was a challenge to her very nature. Kafka's hands stilled. A low, dangerous growl rumbled in her chest. She was failing, and failure was an intolerable concept.

"Fine," she whispered, her voice a silken threat. She moved from behind the chair, her expression shifting from one of playful provocation to a dark, focused intensity. With a grace that was anything but theatrical, she sank to her knees before Himeko. The sight was jarringly intimate the feared Stellaron Hunter, brought to her knees in a parlor car. "You want selfless service? You want quiet anticipation? Then let this subject serve you properly, my lady."

She looked up at Himeko, her violet eyes burning with a defiant, possessive fire. "And I will expect a thorough performance review."

The air in the room crackled, the power dynamic shifting into a new, dangerous, and exhilarating configuration. Himeko looked down at the woman kneeling before her, a slow, triumphant smile touching her lips. She crossed her legs, the gesture both casual and supremely dominant. "Proceed," she commanded softly.

The act that followed was a battle of wills disguised as an act of worship. Kafka, the woman who could make entire planets bend to her script, was on her knees, and she was going to prove that she could be the best at this, too.

Her approach was initially a calculated assault. Her mouth was an instrument of precision, her tongue a weapon designed to elicit a response. But Himeko was an unbreachable fortress. She would sit, perfectly still, one hand holding her coffee cup, the other resting on her thigh, and offer quiet, infuriatingly calm corrections.

"Too much teeth, Kafka."

"You're rushing. The goal is not a quick conclusion."

"Focus. You are distracted by your own need for a reaction."

Each critique was a sharp, stinging slap, and it was driving Kafka mad. The raw intimacy of her position was a heady, intoxicating thing, but Himeko's composure was an unyielding wall. She was treating Kafka's efforts like a poorly tuned instrument.

Frustration finally made Kafka reckless. Her hand shot out, not to touch Himeko, but to knock the small table beside her chair. The coffee cup and the carafe wobbled violently. Himeko's hand, in a rare, lightning fast reflex, shot out to steady the cup, but the carafe tipped, and a stream of dark, hot coffee cascaded onto the priceless, antique rug.

A mess. A beautiful, dark, fragrant mess.

Kafka froze, expecting an outburst, a flash of anger, a victory.

She got none of it. Himeko looked at the spreading stain, then back at Kafka, and a slow, wicked smile spread across her face. "A mess," she said, her voice a low, thrilling purr. "How fitting for you. You have failed to serve me. You have created a problem." She took a deliberate sip from the cup she had saved. "Now, you will fix it. Clean it up."

"With what?" Kafka asked, her voice a low growl, her pride bristling.

Himeko's gaze was heavy, her smile widening into something truly wicked. "With the only tool you are currently permitted to use."

The humiliation was a delicious, intoxicating fire in Kafka's veins. She leaned forward, her tongue, which had just been a weapon of seduction, now becoming an instrument of debased service. The taste of the coffee was bitter, hot, and utterly consuming. As she worked, lapping at the stain, her head was directly in Himeko's lap, a position of profound, undeniable submission. She could feel the warmth of Himeko's body through her clothes, smell her subtle, intoxicating perfume. It was the most degrading and arousing moment of her life.

And it was in that moment of utter debasement that Himeko finally granted her a concession. Her free hand came down, her fingers tangling gently in Kafka's hair. It was not a pull, not a command, but a soft, almost tender caress. A reward for her obedience.

When the mess was… handled, Kafka looked up, her lips stained dark, her eyes burning with a new, more desperate fire. Himeko's composure was still intact, but her breathing was a little faster, her eyes a little darker, the pupils dilated.

"Now," Himeko whispered, her voice betraying the first hint of a tremor, "continue your service. And this time, do it properly."

Kafka's return to her task was different. The brat was gone, the performer was gone. All that was left was a raw, desperate need to conquer this woman, to prove her worth in this strange, new battlefield. Her touch was no longer a calculation; it was a plea. Her mouth was no longer a weapon; it was an act of pure, focused devotion.

The banter did not stop, but its nature changed. It became a breathless, intimate exchange, punctuated by the soft sounds of their breathing and the rustle of clothing.

"Is this better, Himeko?" Kafka would murmur against her skin, her hands working to unbutton Himeko's blouse with a newfound reverence. "Am I anticipating your needs now?"

"You are… learning," Himeko would gasp, her knuckles white as she gripped the armrests of her chair. "Your focus is… improved."

Kafka finally revealed the soft, warm skin of Himeko's stomach and the lace of her bra. She leaned in, nuzzling the space between her breasts, inhaling her scent coffee, ozone, and a uniquely Himeko fragrance of warm amber. "Tell me what you like," Kafka pleaded, her voice muffled against her skin. "Command me. I want to be your perfect servant. I want to be the only one who gets to see you like this."

Himeko's hand returned to Kafka's hair, this time with more purpose. "My breasts," she commanded, her voice husky. "Attend to them."

Kafka didn't need to be told twice. She took one lace covered peak into her mouth, sucking deeply through the fabric, her tongue swirling around the hardening nipple. Himeko's breath hitched, a sharp, beautiful sound. Kafka's hand, meanwhile, wandered down Himeko's torso, over the gentle curve of her hip, and came to rest at the waistband of her panties.

Her fingers dipped beneath the silk, finding the hot, wet core of her. Kafka's breath caught in her throat. She was utterly drenched. Kafka clipped Himeko's swollen clit between her thumb and forefinger, applying a gentle, rhythmic pressure that made Himeko's hips jerk off the chair.

Kafka looked up, her eyes meeting Himeko's, her fingers still working their magic. "May I?" she asked, her voice thick with desire, her gaze fixed on the apex of Himeko's thighs.

A slow, sated, and utterly dominant smile graced Himeko's lips. "Yes."

That single word of permission was all Kafka needed. With a swift, practiced motion, she removed Himeko's panties, tossing them aside. The sight that greeted her made her mouth water. Himeko was glistening, utterly soaked, her folds slick and inviting.

"Oh, would you look at you," Kafka breathed, her voice a teasing, worshipful whisper. She leaned in close, her breath ghosting over Himeko's heated skin. "All this for me? I'm honored, my lady. Truly." She let her lips brush against Himeko's inner thigh. "You have no idea how long I've dreamed of this. How many nights I've spent thinking about the taste of you."

And then she lunged.

There was no more hesitation, no more games. Kafka buried her face in Himeko's core, her tongue lapping at her wet, slick folds with a desperate hunger. She nibbled at her clit, and the reaction was instantaneous Himeko arched off the chair with a sharp, guttural moan, her hands fisting in Kafka's hair. Emboldened, Kafka kissed the sensitive bud, then bit it gently, a playful, teasing punishment that made Himeko cry out again.

"Kafka!"

The sound of her name, moaned with such raw need, was a drug. Kafka redoubled her efforts. While her mouth was busy worshipping Himeko's clit, her hand returned. She inserted one finger, then two, inside Himeko with a smooth, practiced ease. Himeko gasped, her inner muscles clenching around the intrusion. Then, in a move that made Himeko see stars, Kafka put her mouth directly over Himeko's entrance and used her tongue to delve inside, mimicking the thrust of her fingers, exploring her insides.

"Kafka… there…" Himeko panted, her composure shattering into a thousand pieces. Her back was arched, her chest heaving. "Find it… find the spot… please…"

Kafka redoubled her efforts, her fingers curling upwards, searching, rubbing against the front wall. And then she found it. The moment her fingertips brushed over that ridged, spongy area, Himeko's body bowed violently, a broken, keening wail tearing from her throat.

"There! Aeons, yes, right there! Don't stop!" Himeko commanded, her voice raw and desperate. "Right there, Kafka! Don't you dare stop!"

Kafka obeyed, a sob of her own effort and overwhelming sensation catching in her throat. It was too good, seeing the unflappable Himeko come completely undone by her hands, her mouth, her service. She continued the relentless rhythm, rubbing Himeko's G spot while her tongue continued to lap and tease. For six exquisite minutes, the only sounds were Himeko's ragged moans, the wet, slick sounds of Kafka's ministrations, and the frantic, shuddering breaths they shared.

"You're so beautiful like this," Kafka murmured against her, her words a hot, damp caress. "All that control, just… gone. And it's all for me. I've adored you for so long, Himeko. From the first moment I saw you, so brilliant and so untouchable. I knew I had to have you. I had to be the one to make you sing."

"Kafka, I'm I'm cumming!" Himeko cried out, her body tensing like a drawn bowstring.

Kafka didn't pull away. She drank her down, swallowing every last drop as Himeko's climax crashed over her in powerful, pulsing waves, her moans of "Kafka, Kafka, Kafka!" a symphony that echoed in the quiet parlor train car. When the tremors finally subsided, Kafka rose up on her knees, licking her lips and her fingers clean, a picture of debauched satisfaction.

She looked up at a thoroughly wrecked Himeko, her golden eyes hazy with pleasure, her body limp and sated in the armchair. "You taste," Kafka said, her voice a husky, adoring whisper, "like victory. And like everything I've ever wanted."

It was a truly magnificent view, and Himeko, despite her spent state, felt a fresh, sharp pang of desire. The sight of this beautiful, dangerous woman on her knees, face and fingers glistening, looking utterly pleased with herself for having shattered Himeko's control, was more intoxicating than any coffee.

Just as Kafka finished her self appointed cleaning duty, Himeko moved. With a fluid, purposeful grace that belied her recent climax, she stood up, her legs only slightly unsteady. She walked to a discreet drawer built into the bookshelf, and retrieved a sleek, black object. She tossed it to Kafka, who caught it on reflex.

It was a vibrator, designed to be part of a strap on harness.

Kafka looked at it, then back at Himeko, a genuine flicker of confusion in her eyes. "For what is this, my lady?"

Himeko began to undress, her movements slow and deliberate. She unbuttoned her blouse and let it fall to the floor, then unhooked her bra, freeing her beautiful, full breasts. She walked towards her private quarters, leaving her discarded clothes in a trail on the floor. "Wear that," she said over her shoulder, her voice regaining its commanding edge, though it was now layered with a thick, sated warmth. "And do me. Why are you just staring? Isn't it your job to follow my orders?"

Kafka, mesmerized by the retreating form and the sheer audacity of the command, followed her into the dimly lit bedroom, the vibrator still clutched in her hand.

Himeko stood beside the bed, now gloriously naked, her skin glowing in the soft, ambient light of the stars rushing past the viewport. "Now," she said, her voice dropping to a low, challenging purr. "Do me. That's an order." She leaned in for a kiss.

Kafka, her mind still reeling from the shift in dynamics, tried to kiss her back, but her technique was all wrong a clumsy, aggressive clash of lips and teeth. She ended up biting Himeko's lip, more out of frantic passion than skill.

Himeko chuckled, a low, rich sound that vibrated through both of them. She pulled back, her eyes sparkling with amusement. "You don't know how to kiss? After all that?" She took Kafka's face in her hands, her touch firm yet gentle. "Let me teach you, then." The kiss she gave Kafka was a masterclass in control slow, deep, and devastatingly sensual. She explored Kafka's mouth with a languid confidence, her tongue tracing, inviting, dominating. When she pulled back, Kafka was breathless, her head spinning. "And you," Himeko continued, taking Kafka's hands and placing them on her own breasts, "use your hands to rub these. Imagine you're one of my die hard passengers, someone who would kill for this chance. But here you are. You don't have to kill anyone. You just have to be good."

She then picked up a remote from the nightstand and turned on a wall screen. A scene from a tastefully shot, but undoubtedly explicit, lesbian film began to play, the sounds of soft moans and murmured encouragements filling the room. "Now we have to watch this," Himeko declared, a mischievous glint in her eye. "And follow what they're doing. Do it to me, Kafka. Show me you can follow a script, for once in your life."

It was the most absurd, humiliating, and arousing command Kafka had ever received. But she was in too deep now. The game had evolved, and she would not be found wanting. She fumbled with the harness, strapping it on with Himeko's critical gaze upon her, feeling a strange mix of vulnerability and power as she secured the vibrator in place. Once it was secured, Himeko lay back on the bed, opening her legs in a gesture of sublime invitation and command.

"Well?" she prompted, her gaze flicking to the screen and then back to Kafka's face. "Show me what you've learned on whatever shit you were up to when you were gone."

The first position was Cowgirl. Kafka, wearing the strap on, lay on her back as Himeko straddled her. It was a powerful, dynamic position that put Himeko in control of the movement, but Kafka was the one providing the thrust. Himeko lowered herself slowly, taking the entire length of the vibrator with a sharp, satisfied gasp. She began to move, a slow, grinding rhythm that soon became a frantic, bouncing pace. Kafka held her hips, guiding her, thrusting up to meet her, her eyes drinking in the sight of Himeko above her, her face a mask of ecstasy.

"Is this… am I doing it right?" Kafka panted, her eyes glued to the screen and then back to the magnificent sight of Himeko riding her.

"The angle is good," Himeko moaned, her head thrown back, a sheen of sweat on her chest. "But you're forgetting the remote." She tossed it to Kafka. "Turn it on. Low setting."

Kafka fumbled with the remote, and a low, powerful buzz emanated from the vibrator inside Himeko. She cried out, her movements becoming more erratic, her nails digging into Kafka's shoulders. "Yes! Just like that! Don't stop! Your hands… feel so good on me."

The banter continued, interspersed with moans and gasped instructions. They moved to the second position: Deep Impact. Himeko lay on her back, her legs resting on Kafka's shoulders as Kafka knelt between them. This allowed for deep, penetrating thrusts. Kafka leaned forward, changing the angle, and was rewarded with a broken sob from Himeko.

"Aeons! There, Kafka, right there! You're hitting… everything!" Himeko's back arched off the bed, her hands scrambling for purchase on the sheets. "I can feel you… everywhere. It's so deep."

Kafka leaned over her, supporting her weight on one arm, her thrusts becoming slower, more deliberate, each one aimed with precision. She lowered her head, her lips finding Himeko's ear. "You feel like heaven," she whispered, her voice ragged with effort and emotion. "I could stay inside you forever. I've imagined this, you know. In every quiet moment between the chaos. Imagined what it would be like to have you, to feel you come apart around me. The reality is so much better."

It was in this position, with Kafka driving into her with deep, powerful strokes, the vibrator humming steadily, that the final facade finally, completely broke.

Tears began to well in Himeko's eyes, tracing paths through the faint sheen of sweat on her temples. They were not tears of pain, but of a raw, overwhelming catharsis, of walls that had stood for years crumbling into dust.

"You were gone," she choked out, her voice cracking, her body trembling with the force of her confession and the relentless pleasure. "For months. No word. Nothing. I thought… I thought you were dead in some forgotten corner of the galaxy. Or that you'd just… forgotten about us. About me."

Kafka's thrusts slowed, her eyes widening in shock. The great Himeko, worried about her? The confession was more disarming than any blade.

"I missed you, you infuriating woman," Himeko sobbed, her body clenching tightly around Kafka. "I missed our games. I missed the chaos you bring. I was… worried. So, so worried. Every time Pom Pom mentioned a Stellaron Hunter sighting, my heart would stop. I'd scour the reports, looking for your name, terrified of what I'd find."

The confession shattered something in Kafka. This wasn't just about power or pleasure anymore. This was about something far more vulnerable, a connection that had persisted across the stars despite all logic and opposition. She leaned forward, still buried deep inside Himeko, and captured her lips in a kiss that was nothing like their first clumsy attempt. It was tender, apologetic, and fiercely possessive. It was a kiss that spoke of silent observations from across a room, of unspoken understandings in the midst of battle, of a longing that had been nurtured in secret for far too long.

"I'm here," Kafka whispered against her lips, her voice thick with an emotion she rarely allowed herself to feel. "I'm not going anywhere, Himeko. Not for a while. The mission… it can wait." She kissed her again, softly, savoring the taste of her tears and her kiss. "All those times you thought I'd forgotten you… you were all I could think about."

They made love with a new, desperate intensity after that. The final position they settled into was the most intimate of all: Spooning. They lay on their sides, Kafka behind Himeko, her arm wrapped around Himeko's waist, the strap on still connecting them. Kafka moved in slow, sensual, rhythmic thrusts, creating a deep, cuddling intimacy that was a world away from their initial power struggle. It was about connection, about comfort, about being as close as two people could possibly be.

Himeko clutched Kafka's arm, her tears drying on her cheeks, her body rocking with each gentle push. "Don't stop," she whispered, her voice soft and vulnerable. "Please, don't stop. I need to feel you."

"I've got you," Kafka murmured into her hair, her lips brushing against Himeko's neck. "I've always got you." She held her close, whispering sweet nothings, words of adoration and promise, as she moved inside her until Himeko came again, this time with a soft, shuddering sigh of pure, unadulterated release, her body melting back against Kafka's in total surrender. Only then did Kafka allow herself to relax, the harness feeling less like a tool of service and more like a bond, a tangible proof of their union.

In the quiet aftermath, they disentangled themselves, discarding the harness. Kafka fetched a warm, damp cloth and tenderly cleaned Himeko, whose eyes were heavy lidded with sated exhaustion. Then, Kafka slipped into the bed beside her, and Himeko immediately turned and curled into her embrace, tucking her head under Kafka's chin as if it were the most natural place in the universe for her to be.

Tangled together in the sheets, surrounded by the quiet hum of the Astral express, they were simply Himeko and Kafka. The Navigator and the Hunter. The master and the servant, though the lines were now beautifully, irrevocably blurred.

Himeko turned in Kafka's arms after a long silence, her golden eyes soft and luminous in the dim light. She reached out and gently traced the line of Kafka's jaw, her touch feather light.

"You see, Kafka," she whispered, her voice raw with sleep and satisfaction. "True service isn't about submission. It's about giving so completely that, for a moment, you become the one with all the power." She leaned forward, her lips brushing Kafka's in a final, tender kiss, a seal on their unspoken pact. "For a moment there… you had it all."

And as Kafka drifted to sleep, wrapped in the warmth and scent of the woman she had set out to conquer, only to be utterly conquered by in return, she knew with absolute certainty that she had lost the game, but won something far more valuable. She had found a port in her storm, a commander worth serving, and a love as complex, bitter, and invigorating as the darkest cup of coffee, and as sweet as the surrender that followed.

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