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Chapter 27 - Chapter 27 : The Error and the Devil

It began with a hum.

Not the gentle, soothing kind.

A deep, metallic vibration that felt like someone was tightening a wire through Aryan's skull.

Darkness.

The Aethra headset pressed over his eyes. His body lay still in the Neural Dome pod, but his sense of self floated in a black void. No hands. No feet. Just awareness, suspended in code.

For a second, there was nothing.

Then a sound scratched across the silence.

A low, dry chuckle.

Not loud. Not villainous. Just
 amused, like someone sitting at the back of his mind had finally found a good joke.

He didn't think.

The sound was not his.

Before Aryan could form a thought, the darkness tore open with text.

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[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙱𝙞𝙟𝙌𝙎𝚃𝚁𝙞𝙲 𝚂𝙲𝙰𝙜𝙜𝙞𝙜𝙶 

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙜𝙎𝚄𝚁𝙰𝙻 𝙿𝙰𝚃𝚃𝙎𝚁𝙜: 𝙰𝚁𝚈𝙰𝙜 𝙺𝚄𝙌𝙰𝚁

𝙳𝙟𝙌𝙰𝙞𝙜: 𝙱𝚄𝚂𝙞𝙜𝙎𝚂𝚂 & 𝙌𝙰𝙜𝙰𝙶𝙎𝙌𝙎𝙜𝚃 (𝙹𝚄𝙜𝙞𝙟𝚁)

𝚁𝙎𝙶𝙞𝙟𝙜: 𝙞𝙜𝙳𝙷𝙰𝚁𝙰 𝙎𝙳𝚄𝙲𝙰𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜𝙰𝙻 𝙶𝚁𝙞𝙳

Scan lines sliced through the void like white lightning.

Then the font changed.

Sharper. Colder.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙰𝙻𝙎𝚁𝚃: 𝙜𝙎𝚄𝚁𝙰𝙻 𝙰𝙜𝙟𝙌𝙰𝙻𝚈 𝙳𝙎𝚃𝙎𝙲𝚃𝙎𝙳

𝙲𝙻𝙰𝚂𝚂𝙞𝙵𝙞𝙲𝙰𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜: 𝙳𝚄𝙰𝙻 𝙜𝙎𝚄𝚁𝙰𝙻 𝚂𝙞𝙶𝙜𝙰𝚃𝚄𝚁𝙎

𝚂𝚃𝙰𝚃𝚄𝚂: 𝚄𝙜𝙰𝚄𝚃𝙷𝙟𝚁𝙞𝚉𝙎𝙳

The darkness tightened. The hum turned into pressure, like an invisible fist closing around him.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙟𝙜𝙎 𝙱𝙟𝙳𝚈. 𝚃𝚆𝙟 𝙌𝙞𝙜𝙳𝚂.

𝙿𝚁𝙟𝚃𝙟𝙲𝙟𝙻: 𝙿𝚄𝚁𝙶𝙎 𝙞𝙜𝚃𝚁𝚄𝙳𝙎𝚁. 𝚁𝙎𝚂𝙎𝚃 𝚂𝙎𝚂𝚂𝙞𝙟𝙜.

Purge.

Aryan didn't understand the code, but he understood that word.

No.

The thought wasn't calm or clever. It was raw panic.

If this session failed, if his entry was blocked, the scholarship could be withdrawn. The Gate project. The stipend. The roof.

Everything.

His awareness convulsed against the invisible grip.

"Stop," he tried to say.

No sound left him.

The pressure increased.

Somewhere in the dark, the chuckle came again—lazier this time, like the owner of the voice had just leaned back in a chair.

— "So dramatic. You finally open the door, and this is how they welcome us."

The words didn't echo around him.

They echoed inside him.

"Who—"

He didn't get to finish.

The red system font flared again, trying to crush both the voice and him at once.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙎𝙜𝙵𝙟𝚁𝙲𝙞𝙜𝙶 𝚁𝙎𝚂𝙎𝚃 

The entire void shuddered—

—and then froze.

New text cut straight through the command like a knife.

This font wasn't red.

It was silver.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙟𝚅𝙎𝚁𝚁𝙞𝙳𝙎 𝚁𝙎𝙲𝙎𝙞𝚅𝙎𝙳

𝚂𝙟𝚄𝚁𝙲𝙎: 𝚅𝙎𝙻𝚂𝚃𝙟𝚁𝙞𝙰 𝚁𝙟𝙟𝚃 𝙰𝙲𝙲𝙎𝚂𝚂

𝙿𝚁𝙞𝙟𝚁𝙞𝚃𝚈: 𝚂𝚄𝙿𝚁𝙎𝙌𝙎

The pressure vanished so suddenly Aryan felt like he'd been dropped.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙰𝙜𝙟𝙌𝙰𝙻𝚈 𝚂𝚃𝙰𝚃𝚄𝚂: 𝚃𝙟𝙻𝙎𝚁𝙰𝚃𝙎𝙳

𝙵𝙻𝙰𝙶: 𝙟𝙱𝚂𝙎𝚁𝚅𝙎

𝚂𝙎𝚂𝚂𝙞𝙟𝙜: 𝙰𝙿𝙿𝚁𝙟𝚅𝙎𝙳

The darkness smoothed out again. The hum settled.

The voice inside his skull stretched, like a cat waking up after a very long nap.

— "Interesting. The Ledger sees me and still lets me stay. This world really is bored."

Aryan forced his thoughts into some kind of shape.

"Who are you?" he asked.

There was no mouth. No language. But the question carried anyway, like a ripple through water.

The presence inside him shifted.

Heavy. Sluggish. Not like a sharp second person fighting for space—more like a dense shadow leaning against the wall of his mind, too lazy to stand up.

— "Who am I?" The voice almost yawned. — "I am the headache you kept ignoring. The part of you that doesn't flinch when things break. The cold you hid so you could stay a 'good boy'."

Aryan's thoughts stuttered.

"You're
 me?"

— "I'm what's left when you get tired of pretending to be human," the voice said. There was no pride in it. No drama. Just statement. — "You can call me Arthur."

The name dropped into the darkness like a small stone.

Aryan grabbed onto it.

"Arthur," he repeated, wary. "I don't need you. Go back."

That finally got a soft, amused reaction.

— "You're walking into a Coal Age, Architect," Arthur said. The way he said "Architect" made Aryan's skin crawl, as if someone had just read out a future title he hadn't earned yet. — "Half a billion students. Same starting line. Same mud. A few with a pocket of Credits, most with nothing. You want to survive that with school project morality?"

"Half a billion
?"

The number flickered in his mind, too big to visualize.

— "Five hundred million assets," Arthur corrected lazily. — "Call them what the system calls them. Children are sentimental; ledgers are not."

"I won't use you," Aryan thought, sharper now.

The headache pulsed once—familiar, sharp, right behind his eye.

Arthur sounded almost bored.

— "You will. Not because I'm special. Because you want to win. And I am very good at winning with minimum movement."

The darkness around them began to thin.

Somewhere far away, a new hum built up—deeper and heavier than before.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙎𝚁𝙰 𝙞𝙜𝙞𝚃𝙞𝙰𝙻𝙞𝚉𝙰𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜 𝚂𝙎𝚀𝚄𝙎𝙜𝙲𝙎: 𝚂𝚃𝙰𝚁𝚃

Smog rolled in at the edges of Aryan's awareness.

Not clean digital fog.

Thick, coal-black smoke.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝚆𝙎𝙻𝙲𝙟𝙌𝙎 𝚃𝙟 𝙳𝙷𝙰𝚁𝙰 𝙲𝙟𝚁𝙎

𝙶𝙻𝙟𝙱𝙰𝙻 𝙿𝙰𝚁𝚃𝙞𝙲𝙞𝙿𝙰𝙜𝚃𝚂: 500,000,000

𝙎𝚁𝙰: 𝙲𝙟𝙰𝙻 𝙰𝙶𝙎 — 𝚈𝙎𝙰𝚁 0

COAL AGE.

The words didn't just read like flavor text.

They landed like a verdict.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙳𝙎𝙵𝙞𝙜𝙞𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜:

𝚃𝙷𝙎 𝙰𝙶𝙎 𝚆𝙷𝙎𝚁𝙎 𝙷𝚄𝙌𝙰𝙜 𝚅𝙰𝙻𝚄𝙎 𝙞𝚂 𝙌𝙎𝙰𝚂𝚄𝚁𝙎𝙳 𝙞𝙜 𝚂𝙟𝙟𝚃, 𝚃𝙞𝙌𝙎, 𝙰𝙜𝙳 𝙿𝙰𝙞𝙜

𝙞𝙜𝙞𝚃𝙞𝙰𝙻 𝙲𝙟𝙜𝙳𝙞𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜𝚂:

– 𝙜𝙟 𝙎𝙻𝙎𝙲𝚃𝚁𝙞𝙲𝙞𝚃𝚈

– 𝙜𝙟 𝙰𝚄𝚃𝙟𝙌𝙰𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜

– 𝙜𝙟 𝙲𝙰𝙿𝙞𝚃𝙰𝙻 𝙱𝙎𝚈𝙟𝙜𝙳 𝚂𝙎𝙎𝙳 𝙰𝙻𝙻𝙟𝙲𝙰𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜

𝚂𝙎𝙎𝙳 𝙻𝙞𝙌𝙞𝚃: 100 𝙲𝚁𝙎𝙳𝙞𝚃𝚂

Aryan caught the important part.

Rich students weren't gods here.

They had more—but not infinite. A hundred Credits. Enough to make mistakes. Not enough to buy the world.

It still felt like a mountain compared to zero.

His thoughts steadied a little.

"I still don't need you," he told the presence. "I just have to work harder."

The laugh that answered him was almost gentle.

— "And I just have to wait," Arthur murmured. — "You can climb until your hands bleed. I'll be right here when you realize effort is not a strategy."

The darkness finally cracked.

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He fell.

Not down.

Forward.

Into mud.

The impact shocked through a body that wasn't exactly his but felt close enough—knees hitting wet ground, hands slamming into something that smelled like rotten eggs, iron, and burnt stone.

He coughed.

The world slammed into focus.

He wasn't in a neon city.

He was in a wasteland of smoke.

Tall brick chimneys stabbed into a sky the color of old bruises. Black smoke poured from them, thick and constant, turning the air into a choking soup. Rows of crooked brick buildings leaned against each other like exhausted workers. Rusted rail tracks cut through the mud, half-submerged in black water.

In the distance, massive heaps of coal rose like jagged hills. Tiny figures moved over them like ants—students, all in rough work clothes, coughing and stumbling as they tried to get their bearings.

This wasn't a game lobby.

This was an open-pit factory.

A text frame blinked into his vision.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝚄𝚂𝙎𝚁: 𝙰𝚁𝚈𝙰𝙜 𝙺𝚄𝙌𝙰𝚁

𝚁𝙎𝙶𝙞𝙟𝙜: 𝙞𝙜𝙳𝙷𝙰𝚁𝙰 𝚉𝙟𝙜𝙎 — 𝚂𝙎𝙲𝚃𝙟𝚁 4 (𝙵𝚁𝙞𝙜𝙶𝙎)

𝙳𝙟𝙌𝙰𝙞𝙜: 𝙱𝚄𝚂𝙞𝙜𝙎𝚂𝚂 & 𝙌𝙰𝙜𝙰𝙶𝙎𝙌𝙎𝙜𝚃 (𝙹𝚄𝙜𝙞𝙟𝚁 𝚃𝚁𝙰𝙞𝙜𝙎𝙎)

𝚂𝚃𝙰𝚁𝚃𝙞𝙜𝙶 𝙲𝚁𝙎𝙳𝙞𝚃𝚂: 0

Zero.

Of course.

His eyes flicked automatically to the side, where a translucent leaderboard hovered in the smoky air.

Top balances.

𝚅𝚒𝚔𝚛𝚊𝚖 𝚁𝚊𝚘 — 100 𝙲𝚁

𝚉𝚊𝚛𝚊 𝙌𝚎𝚑𝚝𝚊 — 100 𝙲𝚁

Other names followed, all in the same narrow band—eighty, ninety, a hundred Credits. Children of families who could buy the maximum seed allocation when DHARA opened its pre-sale.

They weren't at a different starting line.

Just
 a step ahead.

On the ground around him, some students in the same rough clothes were already whispering.

"Look there, that one has money—"

"Only hundred, stupid. Not lakhs."

"Hundred is still hundred
"

The Coal Age had rules.

It wasn't a fantasy where a prince started with a golden sword and everyone else got sticks. It was a ledger game.

Arthur's voice came back, as lazy as the smoke.

— "See? Balanced. Fair. Vaguely kind. And still designed to crush most of you."

Aryan pushed himself up, boots sinking into the black slush. The air burned his throat. He wiped his hands on his coarse shirt and looked down at his avatar properly for the first time.

Rough grey workwear. Heavy boots. No fancy gear. No glowing weapons.

Just a canvas satchel at his side.

He opened it.

Inside: a rusted metal chisel, a short ledger notebook with blank pages, and a small stamp with his name on it.

ARYAN KUMAR

ASSET CLASS: JUNIOR

No money.

Just tools to write.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙜𝙟𝚃𝙎: 𝙰𝚂 𝙰 𝙱𝚄𝚂𝙞𝙜𝙎𝚂𝚂 𝙳𝙟𝙌𝙰𝙞𝙜 𝚃𝚁𝙰𝙞𝙜𝙎𝙎, 𝚈𝙟𝚄𝚁 𝙿𝚁𝙞𝙌𝙰𝚁𝚈 𝚆𝙎𝙰𝙿𝙟𝙜 𝙞𝚂 𝙲𝙟𝙜𝚃𝚁𝙰𝙲𝚃, 𝙜𝙟𝚃 𝙵𝙞𝚂𝚃.

𝙲𝙰𝚄𝚃𝙞𝙟𝙜: 𝙲𝙟𝙜𝚃𝚁𝙰𝙲𝚃𝚂 𝙲𝙰𝙜 𝙳𝙰𝙌𝙰𝙶𝙎 𝚃𝙷𝙎 𝚂𝙞𝙶𝙜𝙎𝚁.

A scream cut through the smog.

Not digital. Human.

Aryan turned.

Not far from him, another group of students were still spawning in.

Some staggered. Some fell. One boy, disoriented, slipped in the mud and went face-first into a shallow ditch filled with oily water. He emerged coughing, eyes red, avatar already stained black.

A golden notification hovered above that boy's head for a moment.

𝚂𝙎𝙎𝙳 𝙱𝙰𝙻𝙰𝙜𝙲𝙎: 100 𝙲𝚁

He wasn't dressed differently.

No crown.

No halo.

But a single number made every head near him snap in his direction.

Like blood in water.

The boy saw his own balance, grinned, and opened his menu quickly, already looking for something to buy.

Arthur hummed.

— "He'll waste half of it on shiny tools in the first hour," he said lazily. — "Then someone smarter will sell him the rope to hang himself."

"I'm not him," Aryan thought back sharply.

— "I know," Arthur said. — "You're more dangerous. You won't waste anything. You'll bleed for every Credit. People like that are the ones the system loves most. They generate the best data."

The wind shifted.

Somewhere far away, a massive bell tolled once—deep, metallic, echoing through the sector.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝙲𝙟𝙰𝙻 𝙰𝙶𝙎 𝙶𝙻𝙟𝙱𝙰𝙻 𝙜𝙟𝚃𝙞𝙲𝙎

𝙰𝙻𝙻 𝙿𝙰𝚁𝚃𝙞𝙲𝙞𝙿𝙰𝙜𝚃𝚂:

𝚃𝙷𝙞𝚂 𝙎𝚁𝙰 𝚃𝙎𝚂𝚃𝚂 𝚈𝙟𝚄𝚁 𝙰𝙱𝙞𝙻𝙞𝚃𝚈 𝚃𝙟 𝙱𝚄𝙞𝙻𝙳 𝚅𝙰𝙻𝚄𝙎 𝙵𝚁𝙟𝙌 𝙜𝙟𝚃𝙷𝙞𝙜𝙶.

𝙜𝙟 𝙟𝙜𝙎 𝙎𝚂𝙲𝙰𝙿𝙎𝚂 𝙌𝚄𝙳.

𝙟𝙜𝙻𝚈 𝚂𝙟𝙌𝙎 𝙻𝙎𝙰𝚁𝙜 𝚃𝙟 𝙟𝚆𝙜 𝙞𝚃.

Half a billion students.

Same era.

Same mud.

Some with 100 Credits.

Some with none.

All of them about to claw, bargain, cheat, invent, and break themselves to climb out of this soot.

Aryan stood there, breathing hard, letting the smoke sting his eyes.

The Gate, the vendors, the leaking roof—everything that had felt big yesterday suddenly felt small against this world.

But not unconnected.

Mud was mud.

Rules were rules.

"If I can understand the rules," he thought slowly, "I can survive."

Arthur's presence shifted again, heavier, like it had just settled comfortably into a permanent seat in the back row of Aryan's mind.

— "Good. Start there," he said. — "Understand. Watch. Don't run yet. When you see a pattern worth cutting
 I'll be here."

A new line of text appeared, almost as an afterthought.

[𝙲𝙷𝙞𝚃𝚁𝙰 𝚂𝚈𝚂𝚃𝙎𝙌]

𝚂𝙎𝙲𝙟𝙜𝙳𝙰𝚁𝚈 𝙜𝙎𝚄𝚁𝙰𝙻 𝚂𝙞𝙶𝙜𝙰𝚃𝚄𝚁𝙎:

𝙰𝙻𝙞𝙰𝚂 𝚁𝙎𝙶𝙞𝚂𝚃𝙎𝚁𝙎𝙳 — 𝙰𝚁𝚃𝙷𝚄𝚁

𝙰𝙲𝙲𝙎𝚂𝚂 𝙻𝙎𝚅𝙎𝙻: 𝚂𝙷𝙰𝙳𝙟𝚆 𝙟𝙱𝚂𝙎𝚁𝚅𝙎𝚁

Aryan stared at that.

"They
 registered you?"

— "The Ledger likes interesting errors," Arthur replied. — "And I am very interesting."

Aryan tightened his grip on the small stamp in his hand.

The Coal Age had begun.

He had no Credits. No weapons.

Just a notebook, a name seal



and something in his head that laughed in the dark when the system said the word purge.

He took his first step through the mud.

Not toward the leaderboard.

Not toward the distant chimneys.

Toward a small, half-collapsed structure on the horizon—brick walls, a dead chimney, no smoke. A ruin.

It looked like something the world had already decided was useless.

Those were the only things that ever gave him a chance.

As he walked, the industrial wind howled past his ears.

It didn't sound like welcome.

It sounded like a question.

And somewhere deep inside him, quieter than the smoke, Arthur answered it first.

— "Let's see what you do, Architect."

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