Rain hammered the apartment like someone had turned the entire sky into a drum. The kind of hard, merciless rain that made the walls feel thinner, the windows older, and the world a little too quiet inside. Our third floor flat always creaked when it rained, but tonight the wind felt angrier than usual, rattling the balcony grill with impatient fingers.
I sat cross legged on the floor, pushing my small red toy car across the cracked tiles. The wheels wobbled. The car bumped over a line in the floor and flipped dramatically. I made explosion noises for effect. My father chuckled from the sofa without taking his eyes off the cricket commentary on the radio.
"You're crashing more than the Indian batting lineup," he said.
I pretended I didn't hear him. I liked crashing things. The sound made the room feel alive.
The smell of turmeric floated from the kitchen where my mother stirred dal in her favorite steel pot. She hummed something soft, a tune I never remembered the words to, only the comfort it brought. The tube light flickered above her, buzzing like it was arguing with the storm.
Everything was normal.
Until the door opened.
Not knocked.
Not rattled by the wind.
Opened. Silently. Intentionally.
My mother froze. The ladle stopped mid-air. A thin ribbon of dal dripped back into the pot.
My father looked up, frowning. "Who?"
Before he finished, my mother's voice cut in sharply, trembling beneath the surface.
"Tejas," she said. "Come here."
My stomach twisted. She never used that tone.
I left the toy car and walked toward her. She knelt down, cupped my face with hands that smelled of turmeric and lemon, and whispered, "If I tell you to run, you grab Papa and run. Don't look back. Understand?"
I didn't. But I nodded anyway.
A tall man stepped inside the apartment, shutting the door behind him without a word. His clothes were drenched, dripping muddy water onto the floor. Yet he didn't seem cold. Or tired. Or even alive the way other people were.
His eyes scanned the room. Not curious calculating. Like he was measuring the space and the people in it against some invisible checklist.
My father stood up. "Excuse me? Who are you? You can't just...."
The man didn't look at him.
He looked at my mother.
"Agnivansh," he said quietly. Almost reverently. Almost like a greeting.
The word cut through the air like a blade.
My mother's breath caught. Her fingers tightened on my shoulders.
"You shouldn't be here," she said.
The man took a step forward. The wet fabric of his shirt clung to a lean, strong frame. His expression never changed.
"Agnivansh," he repeated.
Something in the air shifted. Like the room inhaled sharply and forgot how to breathe again.
My father positioned himself between the man and us. "Listen I don't know who you are, but you need to leave."
The stranger tilted his head slightly. Still silent. Still unblinking.
Then he said a sentence I didn't understand, in a voice too calm for what came next:
"यातनायाः सिद्धिः जायते."
Perfection is forged in pain.
My mother straightened. Her eyes hardened not with fear, but with something older. Something fierce.
She replied in words that felt like they burned the air:
"अग्निः प्रतिज्ञा, अग्निः मूल्यं."
Fire is a promise, and a price.
The man's gaze sharpened. His fingers flexed.
My father stepped forward but the stranger moved faster.
He grabbed my father's right arm and twisted. There was a sickening crack. My father cried out, falling to his knees, clutching his chest as he gasped for breath.
"Papa!" I screamed, but my mother's hand clamped around my wrist.
Then the impossible began.
The man's skin shifted.
Darkened.
Became glossy.
Became… metal.
A low scraping sound filled the room as the metallic transformation crawled up his arms and neck, plates forming like he was being forged by invisible fire.
My mother pushed me behind her and raised her hands.
Heat rippled through the air.
The man stepped forward.
My mother took one deep breath and ignited.
Flames burst from her palms, bright and furious, as the metal man advanced.