It has come to my attention that this book has serious plot holes, and as I try to fix and correct them, I arrived at the conclusion the the main framework and progression of the main character is too broken.
Evident plot holes include but are not limited to:
- Mingyuan's growth trajectory.
- Clash of interests between MC and support.
- Imbalance in the pacing of different characters.
- The world building is too expansive from the start.
- No anchor for the protagonist to facilitate agency, goal, and streamlined growth.
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In essence, the novelty of the idea that the transmigrator's growth trajectory and the original protagonist of the world's growth trajectory intersect but remain mutually exclusive is nice, but my execution was flawed from the beginning.
I will work on a better plot, narrative, and structure with a new book that will be published within the month.
Kindest regards, Excommunicated.
