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Chapter 48 - Auther's review

Hey guys, Auther here.

I just wanted to share my own thoughts on this story.

If you haven't checked the author note I left before, then let me tell you here...

This is the end of the this novel.

The story will continue in it's own universe, but sadly it won't be updated here.

I know, that sucks... like why would I end this story so soon with just one volume?

The mc didn't even became fully awakened and got amazing powers.

Well, I wanted to do that. I wanted to make him another Obito uchiha with this aspect... But sadly I ran out of things I wanted to do here.

I didn't want to drag the story further just for the sake of leveling up, you know.

It's fun and all, but without some serious plot, it wouldn't be any fun to read or even write it further.

We all know how this will go, They will challenge their second nightmare, received divine aspects and continue to rise.. bla bla bla.

So this it it.

I did almost everything I wanted to do.

The only thing remaining was to bring hope to the world.

No, not that hope.

I mean Hope, deamon of Hope.

I know it sounds crazy.

How can I even though of achieving something like that, right?

Well, I have this keyboard which gives me ultimate power to do anything I want, hehehe.

Kidding, so I wanted to brought her to real world as an Echo or maybe a shadow.

I know the chances will be impossible.

The spell won't just give you a deamon to work for you even if you somehow manage to kill her.

And even if it did, the soul wouldn't be able to handle the burden of a divine being.

But I had some ideas.

Like what if we explain all this to Hope herself?

I'm sure she would have found a way to leave that world knowing that she will disappear after the challengers left the nightmare.

Like regressing into a normal being, like a Supreme or so.

Rank isn't important anyway.

What important is the person, with there memories and the experiences they had, you know.

If she has that she could easily reach divine rank again.

And I was planning to fill her divine rank soul shards in some storage device, lol.

But sadly it won't come true now.

I can't countinue this just for the sake of one thing alone.

So that's that.

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Now let's talk about the story.

So I know I did some crazy changes.

And I know many of you would hate my guts after I put your favourite characters through this.

But I think I did the reasonable thing.

I tried to explained everything, why I did that, what could have been done otherwise etc etc.

Anyway ... I hope atleast some of you enjoyed what I did. (Evil laugh)

I know the ending was also not expected.

Like why would I turn there brotherhood into that pathetic master slave relationship.

I didn't plan to do that.

But I just wanted to raise the question, you know..

How is that Sunny, with his divine aspect have something that fatal of a weakness?

How can any random dude turn him into a slave just by saying his name and the thing becomes parmanet?

It didn't make any sense right?

What if he got his ture name before he received him divine aspect? And he revealed it to the world like everyone else.

That would be a mess, right?

So I did this.

It succeeded or not is still a mystery.... What do you think will happen?

And I also gave them some new powers without explanation of how can they do that..

Like what Sunny did with his shadows.. and how Raine was knocking people even with just a ascended aspect.

The way I see it is pretty simple.

The aspect rank doesn't matter at all.

Aspects just represent the mastery you have over your element.

Most of the time, the spell do the work for you, like using skills in some game on auto.

And that aspect rank represent how much work the spell will do for you.

If you are a premium user with divine rank, then the spell with do many things that you have no idea your element can even do.

But it should be possible that people can do this without the aid of spell.

If your understanding is high enough, you can do the same or maybe even more.

That's why I gave them these powers.

I know I didn't have to follow logic to that extent but I just like it this way.

I'm a guy who looks for realism in fantasy world.

Ridiculous, I know.

But my whole existence is made of these contradictions.

Like I want to work hard so I can become lazy. (without consequences.)

I want to welcome a new future but I don't wanna let go of the part.

I'm chasing spiritualism for materialism.

I'm cruel and kind.

I want to have everything or nothing at all.

That's just how I'm build.

I know I'm saying to much, but this will be last chapter so I might as well do it now.

...You know, behind the cover of a screen.

I'm too shy to say otherwise.

So.. I hope you learned something new from this story.

I put my all wierd knowledge in this book.

I left some of my spiritual and motivational thoughts in this if you are interested in that.

Or you can just take it as a guide if you ever found yourself in SS world.

If you do then don't forget you also have to eat some of those juicy heart, lol.

So, that's it.

I fullfilled my own fantasy with this one.

I created a fun character and made him experience this fantacy world as if I'm the one living there.

I brought my favourite weapon to life. She's definitely the best one there ever will be. And she will just get better as she climb higher in the rank.

I also try to give Sunny the ending I thought he deserved even though I had to make some.... great sacrifices. (My satisfaction was worth those.)

So I'll give this book a full five star.

...Even thought I felt some quality drop towards the end. ..but that couldn't be helped.

My energy and enthusiasm was getting spent... And some real life thing also made me busy.

You may have noticed that the release rate dropped from fifteen chapters per week to just eleven.

Still admirable but... You got the idea... I became busy. ...and a bit detached from the story.

But at the end I give it a proper ending.

To tell you the truth, this book started over something ridiculous.

I was just enjoying a SS fanfic like you guys with Mordred as MC and I read the author commenting on Cassie that he didn't like her.

I thought oh.. what a coincidence. And I commented 'Me neither.'

That was it.

Some random guy read it and started to argue that I was a hypocrite for not liking Cassie even though I was reading a Mordred Fanfic who is just a psyco villain.

I completely disagreed on it. And that lead to a debate on Cassie. Whether she deserves that hate or not.

I mean everyone says that she didn't have any other choice.

But I disagree.

That's why I created this.

Where I explained what could have been done instead.

I still don't get why she's favourite of so many people? She's the most dispicab-

Mhh... Forgat that. So I was saying ...I hope I explained what could have been done instead.

Honestly I dropped the original book after the start of godgrave arc and I had to made up most of the things which maybe would have been explained later.

I didn't even remember Nephis parents because there was no role of them until the point I followed.

Then some guy commented that Raine aspect was just like smile of heavens.

I thought..oh, really? I didn't knew. Who was smile of heaven again?

The thing is Astral projection and spirit thing, they are very common in spiritualism. They have been there for thousands of years.

Also I mixed some real things with the fiction,... like how fate works, what is that spell is trying to do.. etc etc.

I hope it made sense to you guys.

This book was a fun journey for me.

Although I had very hard time typing in English and Now I know that this language spelling system can't be comprehend with any logic.

And The other thing I found difficult was how Nephis brain worked.

I mean I think I did pretty good when I wrote from Cassie perspective but Nephis...

She is just a different bread all together.

I can't even begin to understand her thought process, maybe I have to shut my brain for that... Maybe you saw that when I wrote her perspective.

Like .... "It's just a Cursed Titan, Sunny... Let's kill it."

What is wrong with this women.....?

You can get killed in one shot if you face someone even one rank higher then you... That's why they are higher rank right?

And she isn't even using her aspect in those fight!

But somehow she kills them anyway..

Like her sword is a hot knife and the Nightmare creatures are made of butter...

I don't know if she could even survive without the plot armour GuiltyThree gave the original trio.

I know I'm using his own story and badmouthing him but that guy deserves this after he put Sunny through all this shit.

He didn't create a single decent love interest for our MC. ..like he should have created atleast a single decent one for Sunny who's dream is to live peacefully while owning a small shop.

The only female character personality I liked was of Sunny's own sister, Rain.

The others are just twisted bunch who can't give Sunny the life he wants to have.

And no, I never plan to do some Raine x Rain.

I just choose the name randomly not even knowing what it meant. I looked it up later on.

Well, that's about my thoughts on the story.

I will mention some people names who were together with me while I wrote this book.

First one is TerraPrisma99.

...Obviously it's me. Without me this book wouldn't be here. And I'm the number one fan of my own book. (All those power stone I send myself didn't go to waste.)

Next is Hassan albo.. something something.

This man was a true support with all his comments and powerstones. Those kept me motivated to keep writing.

This man is dedicated. He only reads one book at a time. I like the faithfulness.

And he hates the female leads as much as I do. Or Maybe even more, I don't know.

He's a reasonable guy who followed this book until the end even though Cassie was his favourite.

I can't imagine the pain he felt when it happened.

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Next would be... Mhh.. let me check comment section again...

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Karr knight...

This guy reads every single book on this app while leaving a single 'hi' in the comments, announcing that he was there too.

I don't know how can he even keep up with so many books all at once. But maybe it's because his brain functions on a completely different level then simple mortals like us.

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Next is AKAI VR

This guy has affinity towards fate and he even receives some revelations in his dreams. ...He's like Cassie. Hope he won't follow her footsteps and make someone's life miserable.

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Next is Benevolent5.

This guy is a author himself even though he dropped his own story... But he's a great motivation for the others who try to write with his comments and reviews.

He left a nice review on this book too.

[He got some wierd taste in womens, (he even wanted me to revive Cassie.)]

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Next one is True Vanity.

He was about to drop this book but something changed his mind so much that he even put this on his reading list.

He likes the duo of Sunny and Raine. ...send cute images which make me doubtful of his gender. (I'm still not sure if he's a male or female.)

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There's also this guy named Ve om.

He was my first reader and supporter.

He even helped me properly set up this book.

But sadly he put his trust in the worng auther. And the result... His favourite character was killed in front of him in cold blood.

he dropped after that.

But I still check on him. He's enjoying other stories and he even found a vampire Cassie somewhere, I'm really happy for him.

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There's also this dude named Irrelevant123.

He was very happy when Cassie got killed. Maybe he likes dark stories. Sadly his comments got deleted for some reason.

He didn't show his presence again because maybe there wasn't enough gore.

Well, I told everyone that this is f for family film, just like Deadpool 2.

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Next are .. SAMX8, Safeshatla.., Daoist brothers and Imitators.

These guys threw some stones at my story, to keep it alive.

There are others too but I'm not gonna mention everyone, you know.

So sorry if your name didn't appear. You can make yourself known by commenting here.

I'm not even sure if you are reading this rambling or not.

But thank you all.

I Hope you guys get rich so you can also afford some original works instead of being forced to read free Fanfic constantly.

So anyway...

....This is goodbye.

No, don't worry. I'm not going to leave this world or anything, Maybe we'll even see each others in comment sections of some novels.

Man, this book totally kept me busy for a month.

But now I can finally read some novels myself without spending my own brain cells to cook it up first. (And I'm gonna nag them that how unrealistic there story is, lol.)

Enjoy,.... until apocalypse hits.

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Well, what else should I say...

Make sure to be kind to others.

Make sure to listen to some quality music. It's good for your health.

Do you know Music is the universal language? If you meet some aliens, you can sing them some songs to show that you are not hostile.

Anyway,...Spred love and make this world a beautiful place to live in.

Or follow the Dao and leave behind this world to enjoy some different realm.

Peace out.

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