Heartwarming

Your story is quite heartwarming and a reflection of reality. This narrative of selfless parents' sacrifice and children's hard work is much like an epic of struggle.To complete or make the story more engaging, you can think about adding the following three points:1. Victory of Education and Ideals: When the eldest son took over the family's responsibilities, did he maintain the quality of being "charitable" like his father? It can be highlighted that perhaps his father's altruistic ideals helped him succeed.2. Role of the Brothers: Did the elder brother similarly educate and raise his other two brothers? Their role in fulfilling the father's unfulfilled dreams will add depth to the story.3. Contribution of the Mother: Even though the mother became lonely after the father's death, her struggle is fruitful in the success of the children