Chapter 1 — Shock: Reborn with a Reading System
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The night was heavy and the neighborhood was dead quiet.
In a beat-up six-story apartment complex, only one small bedroom on the top floor still had a light burning — a dim, yellowish glow leaking through the blinds. Faint, rhythmic sounds drifted from inside the room toward the open window.
Buzz. Snap.
Click. Click.
Then a phone rang, cutting through the silence like a fire alarm, and everything stopped cold.
A tired-looking young man and a pretty woman wrapped in a thin robe froze when they heard the ringtone.
The young man, expression tight, somewhat reluctant, answered the video call. "Mom. Aren't you asleep yet?"
He barely finished the sentence before his mother-in-law unloaded on him.
"Why are you two still up? Do you know what time it is? It's past midnight! I have told you a hundred times — go to bed at a decent hour. Marcus, are you up writing again?"
Ugh.
"Marcus, I'm not trying to be cruel, but I taught middle school English for twenty years, and I couldn't get through the first three pages of that novel you wrote. It was painful. What business does an engineering student have writing fiction? Is that really something you think you can do?"
Snort.
"And what has it gotten you? My daughter married you. What did you promise me back then?"
Pause.
"She worked herself half to death alongside you, had a miscarriage a few years ago, and her health still hasn't fully recovered. She doesn't even have a child. Did you take care of her? You had her selling stuff at a flea market at night just to bring in extra cash. You should be ashamed."
Marcus nodded along, tight-lipped, not daring to push back.
The past was too painful to revisit. It always hollowed him out with guilt.
"Mom, it wasn't Marcus's fault. That was my idea. I wanted to save up faster so we could put a down payment on a place sooner—" His wife, Claire, tried to explain, but her mother steamrolled right over her.
"Don't even get me started on the house! I get furious every time I think about it."
"Years ago I told you two — borrow a little from us, your dad and I would chip in, and you could've gotten into a small condo. Back then, starter condos in this city were going for $150,000, maybe $180,000. But no. He was too proud to use our money. Said he wanted to do it on his own."
"And what are houses in this city going for now?"
"Over half a million for anything decent. Does that sound like a place regular people can afford?"
"Mom, you're right. That was completely my fault. I should've listened. I regret it every single day." Marcus sighed. "We've saved close to $80,000 and we're planning to put a down payment on a place this month."
He'd become increasingly conflicted about the whole homeownership thing.
Watching your savings slowly lose value while real estate shot through the roof — there was a specific kind of despair in that. A quiet, grinding despair that made him question the values he'd been raised on.
He thought about his old neighbor, the one everyone on the block used to quietly call a sucker for buying a run-down townhouse fifteen years ago. That "sucker" was now sitting on a paid-off property worth four times what he paid. Meanwhile, Marcus stood there feeling like the actual fool in the wind.
"Admitting your mistakes doesn't fix anything!"
"Is there some way to go back and undo it? No. Fine. I'm done. Your father and I have $25,000 in savings. We'll wire it to you tomorrow — use it toward the down payment and just get it done."
"Honestly, why does it have to be in the city? You two could buy somewhere in the suburbs, somewhere more reasonable. But no—"
Sigh.
"Your father — God love him — he's getting older and his mind isn't as sharp as it used to be. Some slick operator talked him into putting money into crypto and he lost $30,000. Otherwise we could've helped you even more."
"Alright. I'm done talking. Go to bed."
Her mother hung up. Marcus exhaled slowly and shut his laptop. Claire reached over and rubbed his arm, telling him not to take it too hard.
He glanced at her, gave a tired smile, and shook his head to say he was fine.
Then he remembered he had something more important to do tonight — something he'd been quietly dreading — and the smile faded into a grim, hollow look.
He dragged his exhausted body toward the edge of the bed. His head swam. His vision blurred. His legs buckled beneath him and he crumpled to the floor, consciousness draining away like water through a crack, until he could only hear Claire's frantic voice screaming his name from somewhere far, far away…
Marcus realized his soul had left his body.
He could see himself lying on the floor. He could see Claire dropping to her knees beside him, shaking him with both hands, tears streaming down her face, fumbling for her phone to dial 911.
But he couldn't speak. He couldn't move. He couldn't reach her.
What is happening?
He was terrified. Devastated. Completely helpless. His soul drifted upward like smoke — through the ceiling, through the roof, up into the open night sky. He passed over rooftops and highways, through clouds, through the upper atmosphere. The Earth shrank beneath him. Stars blurred past. He was pulled into a black hole, and then—
Nothing.
Darkness.
And then — a ding.
Something vast and incomprehensible merged into his consciousness. The darkness split open. Everything became sharp and clear.
Before he could process it—
Time reversed.
He was watching his own life rewind like a film reel spinning backward, faster and faster.
He saw himself collapse on the bedroom floor. Saw himself arguing on the phone with his mother-in-law. Saw moment after moment flicker past like a slideshow he never asked to sit through.
March 2022 — he and Claire won a spot in a housing lottery for a new development. The units were going for $400 per square foot. He'd stood outside that evening staring at the price sheet, completely lost.
March 2021 — he'd been talking to coworkers about Bitcoin and Tesla stock, kicking himself for not getting in earlier. One of them casually mentioned the house he'd bought in 2017 had tripled in value. Marcus stared out the break room window, feeling hollowed out.
March 2020 — after months of failed attempts to conceive, the doctor told both of them they were physically burned out. They'd need at least a year of rest.
March 2019 — his third novel tanked after its online release. He finally accepted that he didn't understand what readers wanted anymore and resolved to just show up consistently and collect the completion bonuses.
March 2018 — a coworker's townhouse had jumped from $120 per square foot to nearly $280. Marcus had passed on that same neighborhood the year before. He'd been sick about it for weeks.
March 2017 — he and his coworker had gone to look at a new development. The sales agent warned him prices were about to rise. He thought it was a sales pitch. Two weeks later, they went up $20 per square foot. His coworker was grinning. Marcus felt like he'd been slapped.
March 2016 — Claire's spirits had lifted, and she'd decided to try again for a baby while still recovering.
July 2014 — Claire had been secretly working weekend flea markets to bring in extra money. The exhaustion had caused a miscarriage at twelve weeks. Marcus had shattered on the inside. His mother-in-law stopped speaking to him for months.
February 14, 2014 — Claire told him she was pregnant. He'd sat in the hospital parking lot and cried from the sheer joy of it.
February 14, 2013 — they got married at the county clerk's office with no ring, no caterer, no venue. A few photos at a portrait studio. Pizza with close friends afterward. Claire had laughed the whole day and told him it was perfect.
July 2012 — they graduated and stayed in the city to work. Starting salaries were mediocre. To stay afloat, Marcus picked up freelance drafting gigs at night while Claire waitressed on weekends.
August 2010 — his father fell off a ladder doing odd jobs and broke his hip. Marcus spent two weeks calling relatives asking to borrow money for the surgery.
September 2009 — his father tried to take out a small loan for his college tuition and was turned down. Marcus felt the weight of that day like a stone in his chest for years.
October 8, 2008 — Lakewood State University of Technology. Room 404, East Hall. He was digging through his desk for a textbook.
Marcus blinked.
His consciousness slammed back into that body like a fist through a window — sudden, jarring, real. He grabbed the edge of the desk with both hands to steady himself, knuckles going white, heart slamming against his ribs.
An hour later, once the shock had settled into something manageable, he understood two things clearly: he had been sent back, and he hadn't come back empty-handed.
"I'm back."
"I'm actually back."
"Claire — I'm coming home."
He laughed. A wild, broken laugh that bounced off the dorm room walls and dissolved into something wet and quiet. He pressed the back of his hand to his eyes and just let himself cry for a while.
He didn't know how long he'd floated out there in the dark between lives, helpless and voiceless, watching Claire hold his cooling body. That memory of her face — the desperation in it — would stay with him.
He'd wanted nothing more than to come back. And he had.
When the tears finally ran dry, he got quiet. Began to think. Began to plan.
Why had he and Claire ground themselves down so completely in his previous life?
Money. It always came back to money.
If they'd had more of it early on, Claire wouldn't have had to kill herself working those weekend markets. They could have built a life at a pace that didn't destroy their health. When they got married, he wouldn't have shown up empty-handed, and her family wouldn't have spent years looking at him like a charity case.
He owed her more than he could ever repay.
But here was the problem: he wasn't some financial genius. In his previous life he'd never traded stocks, never played the options market, never even bought a lottery ticket. He didn't have some perfect memory bank of winning numbers or future bestselling novels to plagiarize.
He'd written his own novel — and honestly? His mother-in-law wasn't wrong. It had not been good.
Never writing fiction again.
He wasn't going to delude himself into one of those rebirth fantasies where some average guy wakes up in the past and effortlessly becomes a billionaire. He knew himself. He'd had thirty-some years to develop an accurate picture of what he was and wasn't capable of.
Sure, he vaguely remembered that Bitcoin had gone up, that certain tech stocks had exploded, that real estate had skyrocketed. But knowing that something went up and knowing when to buy, when to sell, how much to leverage — those were different things entirely. If he'd had real talent for finance, he'd have been at least moderately comfortable before he died. He hadn't been.
A person's future is shaped by their experience, their abilities, their character, their network. Just rewinding the clock didn't change any of that. Not on its own.
But the [Reading System] changed everything.
It had come through the same black hole that merged with his consciousness before time reversed — the thing that had made the rebirth possible in the first place.
He'd spent the last forty minutes testing it. He'd read roughly 20,000 words carefully, with real comprehension, and the system had paid out.
$20.
20,000 words. Twenty dollars.
He'd tried a test withdrawal. The transaction had gone through cleanly.
After some trial and error, he'd worked out the rules:
Skimming doesn't count. Speed-reading ten lines at a glance doesn't count. You have to actually comprehend what you're reading — not memorize it, but genuinely understand it. The system tracks whether your reading is meaningful.
Repeating the same material more than twenty times in a row yields diminishing returns — a hard cap built in to prevent gaming it with a single short passage on a loop.
The harder the subject matter, the higher the reward per word.
Advertisements and meaningless filler text earn nothing.
As for the money's source — the system had provided documentation: passive income from dormant investment accounts, unclaimed estate proceeds, and similar paper trails. Clean, verifiable, legal. No red flags with the IRS.
Marcus pulled up the system display — a faint blue interface that only he could see, invisible in a mirror, invisible to anyone else in the room.
[Reading System]
[Level 1: 20 / 10,000] (Experience earned / Experience required to level up)
Usable Experience: 20 Withdrawable Balance: $20.00
Marcus Webb Age: 18
English: Level 4 (87,300 / 1,000,000) + Mathematics: Level 2 (1,300 / 3,000) + Physics: Level 2 (1,100 / 3,000) + Chemistry: Level 2 (700 / 3,000) + Computer Science: Level 3 (3,700 / 10,000) + Mechanical CAD Drafting: Level 4 (131,000 / 1,000,000) + 3D Modeling (SolidWorks): Level 4 (11,000 / 1,000,000) + Welding Technique: Level 5 (1,013,000 / 2,000,000) + MIG Welding Operation: Level 3 (3,120 / 10,000) + Metallic Materials: Level 4 (11,000 / 1,000,000) +
Level 1 Reward Rate: $1.00 per 1,000 words read.
Cash withdrawals available at any time.
At a normal, focused reading pace — a few hundred words per minute of genuine comprehension — he could realistically earn $200 to $300 a day. Push himself and maybe $400.
His skill levels reflected his past life's experience. He was only a freshman and hadn't even taken CAD drafting yet — but he had thirty-some years of professional memory baked in. That was showing up as Level 4. His welding technique, built over a decade of field work, sat at Level 5.
His math, though — most of the formulas had gone fuzzy. Level 2 sounded about right.
The level scale seemed to break down roughly like this:
Level 1 — beginner, foundational awareness
Level 2 — middle school / basic competency
Level 3 — high school / working knowledge
Level 4 — college / proficient
Level 5 — graduate / expert
Level 6 — something qualitatively different; a ceiling most people never reach
Reaching Level 5 in anything took serious time and some natural ability. Level 6 was likely rare by design.
Each skill had sub-categories. His English broke into Speaking, Listening, Reading, and Writing. His reading score was the highest by far — 6,500 — while his speaking was a weak 1,300. That matched his previous life perfectly; he'd been a technical writer and report editor, not a public speaker.
He tested the experience allocation. He moved 20 points into Calculus. The total math score ticked up to 1,320. A warm current passed through his mind — not dramatic, but real. He picked up the calculus textbook on his desk and found that concepts he'd half-remembered were suddenly legible again.
So the system worked like this:
System experience could be spent to level up skills and lock in knowledge, preventing the kind of gradual forgetting that had erased most of his calculus over the years.
Self-study experience accumulated naturally through regular reading and learning but couldn't be spent on upgrades.
Taken together, the system didn't make him a genius overnight. But it could make him — with steady, consistent effort — genuinely excellent at whatever he chose to focus on. That was rarer than it sounded.
He stood up from the desk, stretched, and looked around the dorm room.
Gray concrete floor. Six bunks. About 300 square feet. Loft-style beds above the desks. No air conditioning — just a box fan humming in the corner, probably losing the battle against the late-summer heat. The bathroom was a shared situation at the end of the hall.
He was alone in the room right now.
He vaguely remembered: he'd had a Calculus II lecture that afternoon, forgot his textbook, ran back to the dorm to grab it — and clearly never made it back. He had zero interest in sitting through that lecture now. The professor wouldn't notice; it was a 200-person gut course in a lecture hall.
If it weren't for this system, he might've seriously considered dropping out and finding some angle to make money faster. But with the system, staying in school made sense. University gave him access to resources, time, and structure. Starting a business and finishing a degree weren't mutually exclusive — not for him, not anymore.
He took stock of his situation.
His hometown was forty miles outside of Columbus, Ohio. His family's background was rural — his parents worked a small farm, grew sweet corn mostly, maybe sixty acres of it. Good yields in a decent year, but between seed costs and equipment and the unpredictability of commodity prices, the net income was modest. Not poverty, exactly, but the kind of life where one bad harvest or one medical bill could knock everything sideways.
His family had a younger sister still in high school. Her semester fees hadn't been paid yet. He remembered — years later, she'd finally told him that her teacher had been sending home notices, and she'd been too embarrassed to say anything. She'd cried about it quietly at night. He hadn't known at the time.
Life was brutal in ways that didn't always announce themselves.
Tuition for the year was around $9,000. His parents had taken out a small personal loan to cover it. Between the loan payments, his sister's high school expenses, and the general fragility of a farm income, asking for anything extra felt impossible.
But right now, at Level 1, he could realistically earn $250 to $400 a day through careful, focused reading.
To put that in perspective — in 2008, the average starting salary for a graduate of his university was around $35,000 a year. That worked out to roughly $1,400 every two weeks before taxes.
If he read seriously, he could match or beat that figure by himself, as a freshman, without a degree.
And that was Level 1.
He didn't know yet how the system scaled as he leveled up — but he suspected the rewards grew significantly.
He didn't need to be a crypto trader. He didn't need a perfect memory for lottery numbers. He didn't need to be some reborn chosen one with insider knowledge and supernatural charm.
He just needed to read.
And he'd always been good at that.
Marcus pulled his chair back to the desk, cracked open a thick textbook — Engineering Mechanics: Statics — turned to page one, and started.
A new life, bought with honest effort. He could live with that.
Of course, even after being given a second chance, a person would never be content with just getting by.
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