LOMAN'S HEAVEN – CHAPTER 10: "LOMAN'S HELL"
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EXT. MASSIVE GATE – NIGHT
KAMAL and MIRAYA stand before the massive, vine-covered gate. It slowly opens with a deep mechanical groan.
MIRAYA
Open it.
The gate creaks, and blinding light spills out.
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INT. VIEWERS' SCREENS – SIMULTANEOUS
People across the globe watching on the dark web. Suddenly, all their screens go black.
TEXT ON SCREEN:
> "PAY $500 TO ACCESS LOMAN'S HELL"
Mixed reactions:
Some viewers slam their laptops shut, annoyed.
Some just go back to Loman's Heaven.
Others... hesitate… then pull out their cards.
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INT. LOMAN'S HELL – NIGHT
KAMAL and MIRAYA enter the next dimension — and it's fucking chaos.
Fire. Screams. Sirens. The entire place feels like a war-torn city at the edge of existence.
A man is stabbed in broad daylight. No one stops.
Children scream as they're dragged by masked brutes.
Women cry, pinned against bloodied walls.
Old men beg for mercy, only to be kicked aside like trash.
KAMAL
(horrified)
What the fuck is this place?
They walk forward. A man is set on fire right next to them. A group of roided-up men laugh and clap.
MIRAYA
(low)
We need to move. Fast.
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EXT. STREETS OF LOMAN'S HELL – CONTINUOUS
Kamal and Miraya sprint as monstrous men you — twice their size — spot them.
MAN #1
(points)
Hey! New meat!
MAN #2
Get the girl!
A brutal chase begins. Kamal grabs Miraya's hand and bolts. They dodge fire pits, climb torn fences, knock over crates.
The streets are ALIVE with evil. No rules. No morals. Just pain.
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INT. ABANDONED BUILDING – NIGHT
Kamal and Miraya hide, panting.
RANDOM VOICE
Give it to him.
Suddenly — Miraya pulls out a Bluetooth earpiece and hands it to Kamal.
KAMAL
(confused)
What…? Where did you get this?
MIRAYA
Just take it.
He puts it in. A familiar voice cracks in.
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INT. CONTROL ROOM – SIMULTANEOUS
LOKI, cocky as hell, speaks through the mic. MANOHAR smirking beside him.
LOKI (V.O.)
Yo, Kamal! Been a while, huh?
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INT. ABANDONED BUILDING – CONTINUOUS
KAMAL
You fuck.
LOKI (V.O.)
So... how's our latest attraction?
Welcome to Loman's Hell.
KAMAL
(furious)
Hell?
LOKI (V.O.)
What, you thought there'd be a heaven without a hell?
Cut to disturbing visuals of the streets — women being sold, kids beaten, old men robbed.
LOKI (V.O.)
The small, pathetic ones?
They're fragments from the minds of coma patients.
The big ones?
Our paid employees. Living out their sickest fantasies.
All the shit they were too weak or too scared to do in real life — they do it here.
KAMAL
(seething)
I was unsure before...
But now I swear — I'm going to fucking burn every single one of you alive.
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INT. CONTROL ROOM – SIMULTANEOUS
LOKI
(smirks)
Good luck with that, buddy.
MANOHAR
You'll need it.
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INT. ABANDONED BUILDING – MOMENTS LATER
Kamal looks at Miraya. Broken.
KAMAL
Why are you doing this to me?
Why are you a part of this?
LOKI (V.O.)
(overhearing)
Ohhh shit. I totally forgot to mention...
Pause
LOKI (V.O.)
Your little girlfriend there?
She's not from any coma patient's mind.
She's controlled. A puppet.
Every moment, every hug, every fake tear... was programmed by us. Programming a whole personality into one host is brutal. Months of neural sculpting. She's one of our rare successes. We have done this on very few. And your girl is one of it.
Kamal stares at Miraya. Eyes wide. Shock. Disgust. Betrayal.
MIRAYA
(softly)
I love you, Kamal.
LOKI AND MANOHAR (V.O.)
(mocking)
"I love you Kamal!"
(pissing themselves laughing)
LOKI (V.O.)
Damn, even I teared up a little.
(laughs harder)
You really fell for her, huh?
CLICK. The line cuts.
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KAMAL
Frozen. Trembling. Then... pure fucking rage.
He throws the earpiece, shatters a glass window, roars like an animal.
He punches the wall. Blood pours from his knuckles. His eyes—deadly.
CAMERA CLOSES ON KAMAL'S FACE – FULL OF WRATH
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TO BE CONTINUED