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Chapter 40 - The Angry Blacksmith

Once upon a time, in a small town nestled between mountains and a river, there lived a blacksmith named Hans.

Hans was built like an ox; his arms were thicker than most men's thighs. When he swung his hammer, one blow was worth three of another man's. Sparks flew all over the workshop, and the anvil sang under his strikes like a great bell being rung. People came from miles around to have him make their ironwork, because the ploughshares Hans forged could break the hardest soil, his horseshoes would stay on for a thousand miles without loosening, and his knives and axes cut through wood as if it were soft cheese.

But Hans had a flaw—his temper was even hotter than his forge fire.

If a customer urged him to finish faster, he would throw his hammer onto the anvil and roar so loud that the sparrows on the eaves flew away in fright. If anyone dared to criticise his work, he would fly into a rage, his face turning as red as a fresh‑drawn billet from the furnace. The townsfolk said that Hans's smithy held two fires: one in the hearth, and one in Hans's chest. The fire in the hearth could make good iron; the fire in his chest could only make trouble.

"Hans, the left side of this ploughshare seems a little thin…"

The speaker was an old farmer. He squinted, holding the ploughshare Hans had just finished up to the sunlight. This was his third visit; the first two times he had been driven away because of small flaws he had pointed out. Now he tried to speak as softly and gently as possible, as if afraid of waking a sleeping bear.

"What?" Hans was wiping sweat by the bellows. His neck reddened at once. "I've been making ploughshares for thirty years. How many years have you been farming? Are you going to teach me how to make a ploughshare?"

The old farmer shrank back a step, nearly dropping the ploughshare. "That's not what I meant. It's just this left part…"

"Left, left, left!" Hans snatched the ploughshare from him, turning it over and over. "Where's the problem? Show me! If you can't point it out, don't you think of leaving this shop today!"

The old farmer's finger trembled as he pointed at the curved surface on the left side. "It's… a little thinner than the right. I'm afraid it might curl if it hits stony ground…"

Hans's eyes nearly bulged out of his head. He slammed the ploughshare down on the anvil and grabbed his biggest hammer.

"Too thin, eh? Fine! I'll fix it for you!"

He swung his arm and brought the hammer down.

That blow was not a repair; it was a smash. The ploughshare bounced on the anvil with a shrill screech. Hans was still not satisfied. A second blow, a third, each with all his strength. Sparks flew, iron filings scattered. The old farmer was so frightened he backed against the doorframe, his lips white.

When Hans finally stopped, the ploughshare was ruined—twisted like a crumpled leaf, curled up on the left, caved in on the right, a deep crack running down the middle like a mocking grin.

The smithy fell deathly quiet. Only the fire crackled in the hearth.

Hans stood holding his hammer, breathing heavily. Sweat dripped from the tip of his nose onto the anvil with a faint hiss. He stared at the scrap of iron before him and could find no words.

The old farmer said nothing. He turned and walked away. His shadow stretched long and bent in the setting sun, like a question mark.

Hans tossed his hammer into a corner and slumped down onto the bellows stool. The firelight flickered across his face.

He didn't eat any supper that night. He lay down on his bed in his clothes and fell asleep.

He had a dream.

In the dream, the forge fire suddenly leaped high. The flames were no longer red, but a colour he had never seen before—like autumn maple leaves, like the glow of sunset, somewhere between red and gold. The fire curled and twisted at the mouth of the hearth and slowly gathered into the shape of a person.

It was a flame‑haired spirit, her whole body made of dancing fire. Her hair was tongues of flame, her eyes two white‑hot coals, her fingers like five slender candle flames. She sat on the edge of the hearth, legs crossed, head tilted, looking at Hans.

"Hans, Hans," the flame spirit spoke, her voice a mix of bellows' rush and the hiss of quenching steam, "today you ruined a good ploughshare."

Even in his dream, Hans was stubborn. "That old fellow was too picky! My ploughshares are never flawed!"

The flame spirit laughed, a sound like sparks popping from a stove. She stretched out a fiery finger and pointed at Hans's chest.

"Every blow you struck fell on the ploughshare," she said. "But do you know? Every blow also fell here."

The moment her fingertip touched his chest, Hans felt a searing heat. Not pain—a sensation of being illuminated. He looked down. His chest had become transparent, like a piece of iron heated to translucence. Inside, he could see his own heart.

That heart was covered with dents.

Big and small, deep and shallow, as if an invisible hammer had struck it countless times. Some dents were dark—old scars; others glowed a dull red—fresh wounds. There was no smooth place left on the whole heart; it was pitted and scarred, like a gong that had been pelted with stones.

"This…" Hans's voice trembled for the first time.

"Every hammer‑stroke of anger leaves a dent in your own heart," the flame spirit said, her smile fading, her voice growing as low as the last ember in the ashes. "The ploughshare you smashed can be melted and remade. The customers you drove away can find another blacksmith. But your heart—who will mend that?"

Hans wanted to speak, but his throat seemed blocked.

The flame spirit rose to her feet, her fiery skirts brushing the hearth's rim. She gave Hans one last look. "At dawn tomorrow, go look at your anvil. What lasts is your true craft."

With that, she dissolved—like a flame scattered by the wind, turning into a thousand sparks that flew up the chimney and vanished into the night sky.

Hans woke with a start.

Outside, the sky was already pale. Morning light seeped through the cracks in the smithy's wooden walls, drawing thin bright lines on the floor.

He threw off his covers and hurried to the anvil in three long strides.

On the anvil lay all the ironwork he had made the day before—three sickles, two horseshoes, one axe, and the ruined ploughshare. He picked them up one by one.

The first sickle: its blade curled like a wave, useless for cutting grass. The second: its body twisted like a pretzel. The third was even worse—the tip bent back almost to the handle.

One horseshoe was crooked as a wry mouth; the other was flattened like a mud pie.

The axe blade was rolled over like a faded flower.

The ploughshare, of course, was already scrap.

Hans's hands began to shake. Not with anger—a coldness he had never felt before crept up his spine. He set the scrap pieces back on the anvil, unable to name the feeling rising in his chest.

Then he noticed one more object in the corner.

It was an old sickle. On its handle was carved a name—the old farmer's father's name. The old farmer had brought it in the month before, saying it had been passed down from his father, used for decades. The blade had been worn down to a thin strip and was chipped in several places. He had asked if it could be repaired. Hans had not lost his temper that time, because the sickle was so old it seemed beyond anger.

He had spent two whole afternoons repairing it—not forging, but mending. He filled the chips bit by bit and ground the edge smooth inch by inch. He worked slowly, as if tending an elderly person. When it was done, he wiped it from end to end with an oiled cloth three times.

Now, that old sickle lay beside the anvil.

Hans reached out and picked it up.

The blade was straight. Straighter than before, in fact. The places where the chips had been were nearly invisible, and the edge glowed with an even silver light in the morning sun. The whole sickle felt solid and balanced in his hand. It did not look like a repaired old tool; it looked like something newly born on the anvil—quiet, sharp, and unassuming.

Hans stood before the anvil, holding that old sickle, for a very long time.

The forge fire had gone out. He was alone in the smithy. The morning light grew brighter, falling on the heap of scrap iron and on the straight old sickle.

Suddenly he understood.

Every piece of iron he had treated with anger had remembered his anger and twisted in the night. Only this one—the one he had worked on with patience—had kept its proper shape.

No, not just kept. It had become better.

Hans sat down slowly, laying the old sickle across his knees. The ashes in the hearth were still warm.

That afternoon, the old farmer was splitting wood in his yard when he heard a knock at the wicker gate.

He looked up and saw Hans.

Hans carried a cloth bundle in one hand and the old sickle in the other. His eyes were red, as if he had not slept well, or as if he had been crying. The old farmer instinctively stepped back half a step.

Hans set the bundle on the ground and opened it. Inside was a brand‑new ploughshare. The left curve matched the right exactly, the edge as even as the rim of a crescent moon.

"Old brother," Hans said, his voice much softer than usual, "I've made a new ploughshare. This one is yours."

He held out the old sickle as well. "This is repaired, too. Last time you came for the ploughshare, it was really this sickle you were thinking of, wasn't it? You didn't even mention it—I forgot."

The old farmer took the sickle, turning it over to look at the blade, then at his father's name on the handle. His lips moved, but no words came out.

Hans turned to go, then stopped.

"Old brother," he said, his back still turned, his voice muffled, "how much was that ploughshare yesterday? I've forgotten."

The old farmer opened his mouth. The ploughshare from yesterday was ruined; there was no price. But looking at Hans's rigid back, he understood.

"Three silver coins," the old farmer said. "But since you've made this new one, I should add—"

"No need to add." Hans cut him off, his voice still muffled. "Three is fine."

The old farmer placed three silver coins in Hans's palm. Hans clenched them, his knuckles white.

"I'm sorry," he said.

The words were very soft, as if squeezed from between his teeth. Then he walked away without looking back, his steps quick and hurried, as if fleeing.

The old farmer stood in his yard, holding the new ploughshare in one hand and the old sickle in the other, watching Hans's figure disappear down the lane. He looked down at the sickle—the blade reflected the sky and a passing bird, perfectly straight.

"That Hans," the old farmer muttered to himself, "seems different from yesterday."

From that day on, a new object appeared in Hans's smithy.

Not a new tool, not a new forge. It was a pile of small pebbles.

Twenty of them, lined up neatly beside the anvil.

Whenever someone urged him to hurry, or criticised his work, or said something that made his chest tighten—Hans would put down his hammer, crouch, and count the pebbles one by one.

One, two, three.

His hands were large; the pebbles looked like tiny beans in his palm. He counted slowly, moving each pebble to the other side.

Ten, eleven, twelve.

The fire burned beside him; the bellows sighed softly. The smithy was filled only with the sound of counting and the murmur of the flames.

Eighteen, nineteen, twenty.

When he had counted all twenty, he stood up and rearranged them in their neat line. Then he picked up his hammer again.

The force of the hammer's fall was different now.

At first, the townsfolk were not used to it. They would come to Hans with their ironwork, and in the middle of a sentence the big, ox‑like blacksmith would crouch down and start counting pebbles. Some thought he had gone mad; others said he had been bewitched.

But gradually, people noticed that Hans's ironwork had changed.

Not in shape—in something else.

The sickles he made cut grass with an especially light sound, as if the blade itself was seeking out the thinnest stems. The horseshoes made the horses walk unusually steady, their hoofbeats crisp and rhythmic, like a marching beat. The ploughshares turned furrows so straight and even that even the most critical old farmer could find no fault.

Stranger still, these iron tools never wore out. Other smiths' implements needed reforging after a year or two. Hans's work stayed the same after three, five years.

People began to say: a peaceful soul lives inside Hans's ironwork.

When that saying reached Hans's ears, he was crouched on the floor counting pebbles.

At the twentieth pebble, he looked up at the forge fire. The flames danced at the hearth's mouth, red as autumn maples. He remembered the dream, the flame spirit's words—

"Every hammer‑stroke of anger leaves a dent in your own heart."

Hans set down the twentieth pebble gently, stood up, and took his hammer in hand.

This time, he first glanced at his own chest. Through his rough linen shirt he could not see his heart. But he knew that the dents were still there—perhaps they would always be there.

But no new dents would be added.

He swung his hammer and let it fall. The ring of iron on iron was clear and long, like a bell being struck, its echo lingering in the smithy.

The fire blazed, and now and then a spark flew out, landing on the floor, glowing for a moment, then going dark.

Many years later, Hans was old. His beard was white, and his arms were not as strong as before. But his skill as a blacksmith was greater than ever.

One day a young man came from far away to become his apprentice. He stood at the smithy door and saw the white‑haired old Hans crouched on the floor counting pebbles.

One, two, three…

The young man dared not speak; he waited quietly.

When Hans reached twenty, he stood up, saw the young man, and smiled.

"You want to learn blacksmithing?"

The young man nodded eagerly.

Hans pointed to the pile of pebbles beside the anvil. "Learn this first."

The young man was bewildered. "Learn… to count pebbles?"

"Yes," Hans said. "When you can wait through twenty counts without needing to count, you may touch the hammer."

The young man did not really understand, but he did as he was told. He crouched down and began to count.

Hans watched him, the firelight shining on his wrinkled face.

He suddenly remembered that long‑ago evening—the old farmer he had driven away, the ploughshare he had smashed, the fiery dream.

And that straight old sickle—it must still be cutting grass somewhere.

"Master," the young man said, having finished twenty pebbles, "is there a meaning to these stones?"

Hans did not answer directly. He walked to the anvil, picked up a freshly finished sickle, and handed it to the young man.

"Touch the blade."

The young man took it and ran his fingertip lightly along the edge.

"What do you feel?"

"Very… quiet," the young man said after a moment's thought.

Hans smiled. The firelight danced in his eyes—perhaps it was the old flame‑haired spirit, perhaps nothing more than the steady heartbeat of an old blacksmith.

"That's right."

He raised his hammer and brought it down.

The sound of forging rang out from the smithy, neither hurried nor slow, one blow after another. It travelled far—over the town's stone streets, across the old farmer's furrows, over the gently flowing river, all the way to the mountains beyond.

Those who heard it said: Hans is at his anvil again. The things he makes will last a lifetime.

And the twenty pebbles stayed beside the anvil, counted millions of times, each one worn smooth and round, glowing with a warm light in the fire.

Like dent after dent, smoothed by patience.

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