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Chapter 9 - Was the last chapter that bad?

I posted the last chapter and next thing I see is people are dropping the book. So I wanted to ask, before I take the story further. 

Was it bad? What did you guys not like about it? Should I make it milder? Did I come on too hard?

Are people just bad at reading subtext, what little of it there was?

Please tell me. 

Thanks.

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