For new readers, if you don't like over complicated politics, read what is said below, then skip straight to chapter 17 to avoid the slog.
Thanks for reading.
Ok, so you guys really didn't like the Sairaorg arc stuff. I see that. and maybe I overreacted to it too. I really didn't need to add five extra chapters, in hindsight, explaining that stuff.
Because thinking about it, the only thing wrong with Sai being added to MC peerage is that Zekram will take it as an insult. But charges of sedition and conspiracy literally can't stick on them because Sai as a peerage member cannot be an heir to the clan.
So unless Zekram wants to piss of the Satans and destabilize the evil pieces system, threatening the safety of devil society, by revealing that Evil Pieces can actually be removed- cuz a lot of people will wage war on them if he uses that revelation to justify going against mc family, trying to get the evil pieces removed from their subjects that were forcefully turned into devils-then Zekram can only demand a small compensation and apology and then give up on Sairaorg.
This will also permanently cut off Sairaorg's chances of becoming the Bael heir of course, but it will guarantee absolute safety for MC family. They could have simply given this triple choice to Zekram.
Either reveal that Evil Pieces can be removed to the public to try and convict the Phenex clan of conspiracy, which Zekram won't do.
Or privately accept a settlement and take back Sairaorg.
Or give up on Sairaorg and accept a public apology and settlement/compensation.
Either case, he will try to move against them in the shadows but that they can handle.
So, should I go back and rewrite the chapters a little? Remove at least two of them. The Misla Bael chapter stays of course.
Or should I leave them clunky and move on. Because the above explanation is simpler than the two family time and one family plot chapters.
What do you say?
Because if we move on, then I won't be able to change it, cuz next to next chapter they start Touki training.
Tell me in the comments.
Either way, Dulio part 2 is gonna be here tonight.
After you guys comment this I will move this to after chapter 10, to inform new readers to move past the next few chapters if they want to avoid the slog.
Thanks for your opinions.
Next chapter is already out so you can go read it now. Just ahead of this one.