Daoist5gbBzm thanks for your feedback and support
As I said I don't have any experience in writing
As for the grammar I learned English from movies so yeah I don't know much about the grammar of writing in English at all
Im not going to lie I made this fanfic for myself because there are not many fanfics about Viserys Targaryen all there is is haram and with systems I don't like harams very much because they tend to be very messy and
and systems because some of them are way too overused and overpowered
Anyway I made this chapter so that you lovely and handsome readers would point out any mistakes in the grammar and spelling or any other errors in the story
and don't show mercy points out the smallest mistakes and I will fix it
Again thanks for your feedback Daoist5gbBzm