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Chapter 46 - CHAPTER 50: THE COMMENTS GOT WORSE

JAY-JAY POV

The living room was complete chaos.

Again.

Because apparently giving Section E access to fan edits was the worst decision in human history.

Cin was screaming.

Rory was reading comments dramatically.

Felix was recording everyone's reactions.

And Robin?

Robin was making everything worse on purpose.

"Look at this one!" Robin laughed.

"No," I replied immediately.

"Too late."

Then he read the comment out loud.

"Robin and Jay-Jay have enough chemistry to start a fire."

The entire room exploded.

Cyrus looked offended.

"That's ridiculous."

Robin pointed dramatically.

"You're just jealous."

"Of you?"

"Exactly."

Adrian sighed.

"I miss silence."

"You've never liked silence," I replied.

That made Adrian smile slightly.

And unfortunately...

Keifer saw it.

Then Robin opened another edit.

This one was Adrian and me.

Concert clips.

Award shows.

Interviews.

Old memories.

The comments were even worse.

"SOULMATES."

"HE LOOKS AT HER LIKE SHE'S HIS WHOLE WORLD."

"THEY'RE ENDGAME."

Cin screamed into a pillow.

Felix looked emotionally damaged.

And Luka?

Luka looked confused.

"Why are strangers deciding who Ate Jay-Jay should marry?"

Silence.

Then everyone started laughing.

"EXACTLY!" Cyrus said.

"THANK YOU!" Adrian added.

Luka frowned.

"That's weird."

"It is weird," I agreed.

Then another comment appeared.

This time about Cyrus.

And then another about Robin.

And somehow...

every edit became a competition.

Robin started flirting just to annoy Cyrus.

Cyrus started arguing.

Adrian kept defending me naturally without noticing.

And Section E was losing their minds.

Meanwhile—

Keifer sat quietly.

Watching.

Listening.

Getting more annoyed every second.

Especially when Robin casually wrapped an arm around my shoulders.

"Back off," I said immediately.

"You're so mean to me."

"You deserve it."

"I do."

The room laughed.

But Keifer didn't.

He just stared at Robin's arm.

Then at me.

Then back at Robin.

And for the first time all morning—

his expression darkened slightly.

Not angry.

Possessive.

Like he hated how comfortable everyone else was around me.

And somehow...

that made things much more interesting.

This version keeps Luka consistent with the story and doesn't have him magically knowing Section E's school habits. 😊

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